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ayase123

Tonight - Chapter 4 - Part 2

Jul 26, 2007 04:09

They settled down once Junsu started trimming the hair back, everyone worried that if they made too much noise, it might be Mr. Snippers for Chunnie Junior. Junsu held a surprisingly steady hand and became so intense and focused on his task, that Jaejoong wondered if Junsu had missed his calling as a stylist.

Junsu somehow managed to nudge ( Read more... )

dbsk (tonight)

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cheonsang July 27 2007, 00:42:46 UTC

Wow that was funny-good! And the ending was so hot! Good job and I can't wait for the next chapter ^^

ayase123 July 27 2007, 07:23:31 UTC

it's Junsu' POV next chapter and I can't wait to write him ^^

winged_kame July 27 2007, 01:00:53 UTC

So hot and fun! I really needed this tonight! Thanks so much! Looking forward to more!

ayase123 July 27 2007, 07:22:27 UTC

thanks for reading, i appreciate it =)

winged_kame July 27 2007, 11:08:35 UTC

^__^

I wanted to say I really like the serious moments too! Jae knowing how he feels about Yunho and the little angst over it was very well written!

jaejoong_n_n July 27 2007, 02:17:46 UTC

wow, what an ending....
great work, and that was... hot... ehehe -/////-
write more yeah

ayase123 July 27 2007, 07:21:48 UTC

i think the next chapter will be hotter ^^ (so says my muse)

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ayase123 July 27 2007, 07:20:08 UTC

ahhh, thanks! that's so sweet ^^

joyciel July 27 2007, 03:57:15 UTC

YAY!! An update ^_^!!! I loved this chpater...just like how I loved the otehr chapters XD!!! Woot for the Jaeho and Yoosu are coming along nicely ^_^!! Can't wait till next update ^_^!

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ayase123 July 27 2007, 07:21:07 UTC

thanks for reading! yes, the games will start developing Jaeho and Yoosu more... though Changmin has to have his fun too ^^