The Soft Pain of Trust - Part 3 - End

[ayase123]

Title: The Soft Pain of Trust - Part 3
Characters: YooSu 
Rating: Part 3 is PG 
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Summary: Junsu has suddenly become despondent and sullen, retracting from the warmth of the group.  When Yoochun reaches out to help, he finds an emotional wall that he can't penetrate and he doesn't know what he's done to hurt his friend.  As

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[comicbookending]

OMG, WHY ARE ALL MY FAVORITE FICS GETTING UPDATED TONIGHT?
<333 Gonna go read now.

...O___O *gasps at big "END" at the end. Guh. I didn't expect that. XD But that's okay! XD *reads*

[ayase123]

*laughs* My gosh I barely got it posted and you appeared! How sweet.

Yes, it's the end of this, but I'm working on another Yoosu fic... but it's a secret for right now. I *heart* Yoosu!

[comicbookending]

Ahahaha. I like to stalk my flist for updates. Maybe I shouldn't when I want sleep, though. XD

In any case, that was ADORABLE. Wonderfully fluffy, but not too candy-coated to make me want to gag. I love how they didn't just get right down to the sex, which yanno, happens often in fanfiction. It's very nice and believable that Junsu would want to wait for when he trusts Yoochun more. Chunnie whining about not getting any any time soon was cute. XD

Your narrative has a great balance. It's funny without being too much of a character in itself (I'm not fond of non-existant/non-character narrators that are just actually the writer injecting too much silliness into the descriptions @__@ But you're not that, so nevermind. Heh. <3)

All the buffoon lines were just brilliant. XD I literally laughed out loud at most of them. This one's my favorite:

Yunho groaned and covered his face with his hand. “We need to have a talk Chun

[ayase123]

holy mega-comment! *smiles* thank you.

thanks so much for your comment about the transition of the parts, I had a tough time because part 1 was so painful and tears at your heart but by part 3 there's pineapple pizza and happy Yoosu bunnies bouncing around...so I was worried it wouldn't flow well, but I also wanted to keep it realistic and sometimes we feel awful then it just fades with one simple thing.

I may come back later and write them having sex for the first time, I do love smut, but maybe that will be a Holiday treat~ ^^

Again THANK YOU!

[naimu]

“No sex on the sofa, mainly because it’s uncomfortable,” Yunho said, stretching to crack his back.

>____< naimu likes Yunho the sex fiend!!

[ayase123]

I like the Yunho sex fiend too! thanks for reading ^^

[ara_niey]

ahh~love it!!i was mad at yoochun when reading the first chappie..but then things become clearer..good to know that they actually have feelings for each other!~

yunnie and chunnie are what?buffoons?how could jae call them that lol!~so mean of him..*pouts*^_^

[ayase123]

hahaha ~ Jae loves his buffoons ♥

thanks for reading!!

[ichnelle]

yay! i like how it ended happy...it just the vibes i got when i read the first sentence XD~

yay happy ending and yay for the buffoons XD~

now i will just sit patiently and wait for tonight's update ::big grins::

[ichnelle]

oh wait the... is that fuji and eiji on your icons???? waaa~ so cute ^_____^

[ayase123]

yep, that's Fuji & Eiji, aren't they cute!?

thanks for reading ^^

[ichnelle]

whoa~ they are the PoT cutie (though i like taka more ::dies::)

[chuchama]

I checked this last night before I went to bed, and it wasn't updated. I came back this morning to copy some stuff and paste it on Word document so I could always read it even if my Internet goes out, (I do that with all the stories I really like) and it's update. Wow, if that wasn't about the coolest thing ever.

Jaejoong was a trip. I want to quote just about everything he said. Just...the outcome of all of this was just heartwarming and lovable and Yunho and Yoochun the buffoons and just ♥.

[ayase123]

♥ Thanks for reading!

I do that too sometimes, copy stories to Word for later in case I can't get online.