Tonight - Chapter 6

Jun 04, 2008 02:08

Yunho was grateful when Jaejoong flipped the bathroom lights off.  It was much easier to hide an erection in the dark.  Not that he wanted to deny his attraction to the oldest singer, (he seriously couldn’t hide from it anymore), but because he was nervous and awkward.  He’d never even had sex with a girl though he’d certainly thought about it ( Read more... )

dbsk (tonight)

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h0tkisses June 4 2008, 06:16:26 UTC
first???

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ayase123 June 4 2008, 06:19:56 UTC
yep, you are first! YAY! ♥

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h0tkisses June 4 2008, 06:37:48 UTC
yey!!!I'm first!!!whahaha
finally know what happened in the
bathroom..and they were truly in heaven...
*Yunjae*whahaha...just love them....

i thought you've already forgotten this fic
bec. you didn't update for ages..but good thing
you continued this..hahaha!!!
can't wait for your next update...
update soon my dear^^hwaiting

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ayase123 June 4 2008, 07:42:59 UTC
Thanks for reading! I'm working on the next chapter now...

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ichnelle June 4 2008, 07:48:35 UTC
oh my gawd XD.... hawt chapter... nice to see their insecurities about each other's feeling... oh well, in heaven indeed, thnaks for the update >D

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ayase123 June 5 2008, 15:48:57 UTC
thanks for reading & commenting!

♥ I may have Jae's insecurities come out again, but for the next few chapters I think he'll be bold and cutesy ~ and Yunho will be like a fool in love XD

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ichnelle June 8 2008, 02:29:45 UTC
oh, can't wait for it then XD

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phantom_hollow June 4 2008, 08:48:12 UTC
Do you know how amazing you and this fic are? So amazing I stayed up until 3am to read it.
Its so articulate and captivating.

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ayase123 June 5 2008, 15:49:24 UTC
YAY! Thanks for reading! ♥ Sorry you had to stay up so late ~ LOL

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chloe1910 June 4 2008, 09:37:55 UTC
OMG!!!! The almost smut was hawt!!!!!!!!!!
But you cheated us of our Yunjae smut!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hehehe
Seriously, I like this better...I think they should take things slow..and not just jump the gun and just do it...

Can't wait for the next update...and btw, thanks for the fast update yeah..you rock!

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ayase123 June 5 2008, 15:51:01 UTC
The smut is exactly why I got stuck on this chapter for... 8 months! LOL I wasn't sure if they should or the shouldn't.

Next chapter will be up in a day or so ~ thanks for reading ♥

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ayase123 June 5 2008, 15:51:55 UTC
oh yay! you're still reading my fic ♥

thank you and hopefully I'll update the next chapter in the next day or so... which will be back to our smarty pants Changmin and his POV.

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