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Tonight - Chapter 8 - Part 1

Jun 17, 2008 02:08

A/N: Sorry for the delay! Okay, I don't want to tell you the song Yoochun does the lap dance too before you read, but in case you don't know what song it is when you get to it, you can scroll down and find the YouTube link to the video. The song is sexual, the video is NOT, so I don't recommend you actually watch the video, just listen to it. ( Read more... )

dbsk (tonight)

Comments 39

milollita June 17 2008, 07:26:09 UTC

Aww...Yoochunnie is jealous! It's kinda cute but sad at the same time. He really likes Junsu~~~~~I think Junus likes him too. It's just that they react differently compared to Yunjae ^^

You're right about the video. It was really disturbing D: I think it was better to imagine the song T_T But damn, that lap dance was HOT. My mouth was hanging open the whole time I was reading it. O_____________O

I hope part 2 comes soon!!!! Minsu kiss! Thanks for the update.

ayase123 June 17 2008, 07:29:48 UTC

Thanks for reading!!

Yes, you're right, YooSu just has a different way of getting together than YunJae, but they'll get there...but until then, MinSu can have a little fun at Yoochun's expense.

phantom_hollow June 17 2008, 07:32:58 UTC

AGH. Amazing. The YooSu was hawt, but poor Micky Mouse.
Hahah Minnie the Pooh and his kisses XD

This was great. Thanks!

ayase123 June 17 2008, 08:02:53 UTC

Poor Chun indeed, he thinks Su is being mean and Su thinks Chun is being confusing. They need some time locked in dark room to "beat" it out of each other (homygod, did I just write that!? LOL)

phantom_hollow June 17 2008, 11:30:39 UTC

"beat" it out of each other

HAHAHAAHA. Good one xDD

ara_niey June 17 2008, 07:48:58 UTC

ahhh~seems like our chun is jealous!~*smirk*
but i feel sorry for him though..su didn't make things any easier for him either..*sigh*

and yunjae..gah!!~
sickeningly sweet?i don't mind one bit..keke~

ayase123 June 17 2008, 08:01:46 UTC

Oh yes, Chun is jealous and I don't think he was expecting to be jealous, at least, that's what my muse tells me. He gets MORE jealous before he gets LESS jealous, so that will be fun ^^

under_an_oak June 17 2008, 07:56:23 UTC

Ah, I read the whole thing nonstop. In the office. Your characterizations are good and I'm starting to suspect you're a guy or at least, you have brothers because the things they dared each other to do, and even the ease/awkwardness they showed is so....male. I'm really enjoying this, insane giggling it induces and all.

I'm so friending your LJ, hope you don't mind!

*Enjoying herself in DBSK-yaoi hell*
K

ayase123 June 17 2008, 08:00:52 UTC

lol, a guy!? thanks, but no, i'm a girl...but i'm in my 30s and I've been through HS, college, dated frat boys, goth boys, preppy boys, nerdy boys, jock boys and every other boy out there and I've realized one thing, boys that age like to think about s*x! and I do have an older brother...

I've seen it all, heard it all and it still amuses me to write about it ^^ ah, those were the days. (though in my case there were usually boys AND girls in the room, but let's face it, 5 hottie korean idols in a room... that's drool worthy!)

under_an_oak June 17 2008, 08:10:34 UTC

Ah, no wonder you understand their minds so well! Your amusement shows in the good flow of the story, and as a reader, it's really enjoyable. Lovely chemistry between the boys (I so wave the YunJae flag so yay for that!).

ayase123 June 17 2008, 08:14:19 UTC

Oh yes, I really enjoy writing, so I'm glad my amusement shows ^^

Thanks so much!! ♥

yukishirou June 17 2008, 08:10:11 UTC

I can't even begin to tell you how nostalgic it makes me listening to Nine Inch Nails again ♥ although the video (I only saw a little) reminded me why I stopped listening to them >.> just. EEW.
On another note.. *squeeeeals* UPDATE *~* awesomeness ♥♥ oh the lap dance, I read it twice :x hahahaha.
I NEED MOARR 8DD *clings* next part now plz~

..and aw, Chang Min ♥ just when you thought you'd get your revenge *snuggles* hahahaha, and Jun Su XDD; sneaky evil.

ayase123 June 17 2008, 08:13:44 UTC

I am writing MOARR right now ~ LOL

MinSu is milking the kiss scene for all it's worth, I'm having director's anxiety with them ^^

I KNOW! (about NIN) My lord, that was like... the worst video choice for the song they could have ever come up with....ah Trent, you forsake me!

yukishirou June 18 2008, 03:16:40 UTC

WOHOO! 8DD can't wait~
Hahahaha XDDD aw~ poor Yoo Chun *hugs* I hope he doesn't bet Chang Min up or something :x you never know.
I feel so old thinking back on NIN XD; and you know.. Nirvana, Creed and.. various other bands.
THE VIDEO IS GROSS D: I wish I never saw it (or more like, that they never made it in the first place) because I'd probably still be a fan then.. *sighs*