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ayase123

Tonight - Chapter 8 - Part 2

Jun 28, 2008 06:15

A/N: Gah, there will be a Part 3 to Chapter 8 because this game is just too fun to write.

Chapter 8 Part 2
“You broke the chopstick,” Jaejoong mewled, leaning a little out of Yunho’s lap to pick up the broken pieces.

“Huh? Oh, yeah. It’s pretty flimsy,” Yoochun said, hating to lie about something so dumb, but he couldn’t afford for them to ( Read more... )

dbsk (tonight)

Comments 35

winged_kame June 28 2008, 11:08:17 UTC

Yay, another chapter! I'm happy Minnie wasn't left out! As much as I love the couples being together, I feel bad for Min being alone. Sorry I don't have any suggestions ^^;; But I'm sure you'll think of something!

ayase123 June 29 2008, 10:14:48 UTC

Yeah, I feel bad that Minnie will be alone too ~ he'll have some fun along the way though. ^^

Thanks for commenting!

milky0way0boa June 28 2008, 11:29:19 UTC

YEAH!!!
ah, that was so cute
poor minnie ^.^
i loved the end^.^

ayase123 June 29 2008, 10:16:16 UTC

thanks for reading ♥

The "tickling" ending just came out of nowhere (it wasn't part of my original plan on how this game would go) but when I imagined Jae tickling Chun, it was great!

rshauna June 28 2008, 14:01:37 UTC

Wow I have no suggestions but I really enjoyed this chapter. really funny.

ayase123 June 29 2008, 10:16:52 UTC

glad you liked it ♥
no suggestions!? *cries*
that's okay, I think I've come up with one... maybe ~ LOL

ara_niey June 28 2008, 14:44:31 UTC

haha~
chun's dirty little secret is not really secret now is it?*smirk*

'giggling fetish club'?
whatever chun..whatever~*rolls eyes*

ahh~can't help but love those yunjae interactions..kyahhh!~♥

ayase123 June 29 2008, 10:18:17 UTC

I can't decide if Junsu will ever find out that Yoochun spilled the secret ~ part of me wants to see Yoochun running for his life and part of me wants Junsu to go happily through life thinking his band mates don't know.

Or maybe I'll just have Minnie tell him! LOL ♥

milollita June 28 2008, 14:54:19 UTC

AKSDFHJLAKDSHFK!
They all kissed Min! Ha! He got pwned by everyone ^^
I liked this chapter. Despite Chun's a;djflad-ness, Min lightened up the atmosphere xD

My mind is just as blank as yours for punishment. Uhm how about the winner pours chocolate on the loser and licks him clean? Except private parts. That'd be fun~ Crossdressing?
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ayase123 June 29 2008, 10:19:00 UTC

Min most definitely got pwned! He might get pwned again ♥

Ooooh, cross dressing is a good one ~ I may use that, thanks!

milollita June 29 2008, 13:34:04 UTC

Oh yes! Min getting pwned...he gets more love than Yunjae and Yoosu ^^

Haha be my guest.

Hope you update soon ^^