Tonight - Chapter 8, Part 3

Aug 23, 2008 18:58

A/N: I know, where have I been!?  I was stuck on a punishment for this chapter, so instead, I wrote around it, hope you like it!  There's lots of YooSu in this chapter with some YunJae (a dash of HoSu & JaeSu).  This will be wrapped up in 2 more chapters (a total of 10).

Chapter 8 - Part 3

Yoochun slowly came back to life, unfolding himself from ( Read more... )

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winged_kame August 23 2008, 23:53:28 UTC
Ah, the hotness returns!! Don't worry about writing around what you can't think of. This chapter moved along fine! I'm really happy the two couples are together and there's still plenty of OT5 love. Write when you can, and take care <3

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ayase123 August 24 2008, 00:21:50 UTC
Thank you, thank you! Yes, I'm glad they are together now too . Thanks for reading (^-^)v

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sharkbait_ha August 24 2008, 00:25:38 UTC
AW....yoosu. :)) I love the OT5 too~
can't wait for the next chapter. Rah. Min.

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ayase123 August 24 2008, 01:06:33 UTC
I'm thinking of one big OT5 before the story is over~
Thanks for reading ^^

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ayase123 August 24 2008, 01:16:07 UTC
The suppressed and sensual foreplay was starting to get to me too! While I was writing this chapter, I had no idea YunJaeMin was going to offer Su up to Chun on a platter, but it was a nice surprise for me ^^

I blew my wad early on with the punishments, but I think I can think up one more...maybe! LOL

Thanks for reading & commenting *huggles*

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rangikucharlize August 24 2008, 00:46:15 UTC
I LOVE YOU~! lmao
I can't help but adore the fact that everyone jumped on s then left him for chun, lmao
this hottness is <3 <3 <3

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ayase123 August 24 2008, 01:12:52 UTC
YunJaeMin definitely set Chun up for the YooSu, yep, yep.

Thanks for reading~

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ayase123 August 24 2008, 01:11:49 UTC
I can't wait until I write more too!! hahahaha, I enjoyed writing this chapter.

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