The Quartermaster - [1.3] [Changmin]

Sep 24, 2008 00:40



Yoochun reached for his hand first once they made it backstage.  “You okay?” he asked and Changmin nodded, his breath still labored from dancing.

He had fallen on his ass.  He hadn’t fallen in a hole like Jaejoong months back in Seoul, he hadn’t tripped over something or fainted, he had just plain old fallen on his butt in front of ( Read more... )

dbsk (the quartermaster)

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mfnx7mk2 September 24 2008, 05:12:45 UTC
I'm absolutely adoring this fic!! ^^ Can't wait for Su's n Chun's p.o.v which are next ne?

*gives u cupcakes*

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ayase123 September 24 2008, 05:18:10 UTC
Chun is next, then Su ~ Su is quiet in this fic until we get to him, then he'll be a bigger player in the mix of things. ^^

*eats cupcake happily*

Thanks!

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crystaldee September 24 2008, 05:57:01 UTC
Wakakakakaka....
Aiyah Jae.... ^____^
Oooh..the last image of YunJae BJ-ing..that's hot...
XDDDD

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ayase123 September 24 2008, 08:22:01 UTC
Just wait until the next part, Yoochun is way more imaginative than Changmin! (^-^)v

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ayase123 September 24 2008, 08:23:21 UTC
Ah, yes, Changmin is having trouble relating to Jaejoong ~ they'll probably work it out eventually (when Min realizes what a stubborn dolt he's being).

Thanks for reading!!!

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ayase123 September 24 2008, 07:16:27 UTC
I am slaving away at Tonight right this very moment! Just came up with Jae's punishment, so it should flow along nicely now... probably not tonight for an update, but at least in the next day or so ^^

The good news is, the next part of The Quartermaster is already done (in editing) so there will be an update of some sort from me tomorrow!

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vrilly September 24 2008, 07:16:50 UTC
akl;skldkl;asd :)

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vrilly September 24 2008, 07:16:31 UTC
I liked ALOT of things in this, yoochun, the relationships, yoochun, the crack, and the ending:
The last image that flashed in his mind before he fell asleep was Yunho sucking Jaejoong’s cock while Yoochun cheered them on.

OOHLALA ♥

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ayase123 September 24 2008, 08:25:09 UTC
I can't seem to write Yoochun without making him crackish! hahahaha. He's like a breath of pervy air in the next installment.

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