The Quartermaster - [2.4] [Yoochun]

[ayase123]

Junsu was coming back.  Yoochun’s mind was racing, excited and eager to put his next plan into action.  So far Changmin wasn’t responding much to his flirting, but he figured it would take multiple tries before he could wear the guy down.  Changmin was definitely interested in girls, there was no question about that, but was he open to guys too?

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[chloe1910]

BRB for comment..

[chloe1910]

By the way, it should be Yunho and Jaejoong and not Yoochun and Jaejoong in the following para right?

“Yeah, we don’t get out much, sorry about that. But hey, Junsu is coming over to pick Changmin up in a little while, I can introduce you if you like. He’s actually quite friendly and nice, especially if you want to talk about soccer. He’ll be your friend for life,” Yoochun said. “Yoochun and Jaejoong are…” he paused, not knowing if Chinho knew they were an item.

Hm, I still find Yoochun a little too selfish and manipulative for my liking. In his compulsion to know / seduce, he has neglected to consider the feeling of what or how Junsu or Changmin might feel. Well, maybe, just maybe the end result would be positive where Changmin and Junsu might finally realise what their real feelinga are, but to think that Yoochun acting so sneakily, plotting behind their back even when they are members, friends and even brothers is not quite ethical.

[ayase123]

Yep, it was Yunho and Jaejoong, nice catch! I fixed it :)

I assume most readers will find Yoochun's actions and thoughts disturbing, but there is a reason for it and it will take almost the whole fic before that reason is completely revealed (because that's one of the main plots of WHY he's acting that way). Junsu and Changmin will be more than capable of taking care of themselves against his plotting ~ so don't worry about them too much, they all have their own dramas in their heads that will keep them distracted. Even poor Yunho will have some drama (much later).

Oh, and his plotting isn't malicious, it's more like an addiction sort of. So he knows it's wrong, but can't stop himself. Hope that helps.

Thanks for reading !!

[chloe1910]

oh..I know his intention was never malicious but I still find it a little uncomfortable.

Well, maybe we'll just wait for the ending to see the whole picture and understand why he's doing so.XD

[xiao_tian_jelly]

The sudden realization that he could combine his tactics and plans to figure them out at the same time sent a shiver of excitement down his neck. They were both intriguing puzzles, emotional mysteries that were begging to be unlocked through sexual exploration and deep psychoanalysis. Yoochun wasn’t even sure what he meant by all that, sometimes his mind got ahead of him and sounded smarter than he truly was, but he did know one thing for sure; he was looking forward to fantasizing about them later.

best paragraph ever. yoochun's complex mind is hidden between his uber sexy shoulder bones, imo. xD

[ayase123]

thanks :)

yes, i think Yoochun's complex mind is hidden between his sexy shoulder bones too XD

[ayase123]

*snuggles*
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[moon1084]

chun is seriously something else! i hope he doesnt end up hurting minsu.

[ayase123]

minsu will be fine ~ they may scratch their heads a few times wondering what in the world is wrong with him, but they won't get sucked into his mess XD

[lovelykitten8]

i don't like chun he is evil for doing all does things to his friends he needs serious help

[ayase123]

he's getting help, he's just not strong enough yet for it to do much good ~ he'll get there :)