Hm. What can we say that, as your betas, we haven't yet said? hehe.
Brilliantly written, as usual. You have such a great writing style. :) Angsty... well, you always did like angst more than we did, hehe. But you really, really changed this summer makeover cliche! Wouldn't have recognized it, seriously, hehe. :)
Yours is the first story that I read and I hope they're all just a fantastic as this.
Your storyline is amazing and the sour/sweet ending is very enjoyable. I loved that you emphasized enough on your cliche while still making it as realistic as possible. All in all, WOW!
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Brilliantly written, as usual. You have such a great writing style. :) Angsty... well, you always did like angst more than we did, hehe. But you really, really changed this summer makeover cliche! Wouldn't have recognized it, seriously, hehe. :)
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Your storyline is amazing and the sour/sweet ending is very enjoyable. I loved that you emphasized enough on your cliche while still making it as realistic as possible. All in all, WOW!
GREAT JOB!
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This was an awesome twist to the cliche. I loved it :D
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