Ourobouros

Sep 30, 2007 11:55


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zarahjoyce September 30 2007, 05:39:41 UTC
Wow, Bish. It's certainly a twist in that cliche, which was your intention, of course :D It was different and unexpected. A great read!

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pips_n_chiaw September 30 2007, 08:06:15 UTC
Hm. What can we say that, as your betas, we haven't yet said? hehe.

Brilliantly written, as usual. You have such a great writing style. :) Angsty... well, you always did like angst more than we did, hehe. But you really, really changed this summer makeover cliche! Wouldn't have recognized it, seriously, hehe. :)

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afraid_to_be September 30 2007, 10:19:39 UTC
Yours is the first story that I read and I hope they're all just a fantastic as this.

Your storyline is amazing and the sour/sweet ending is very enjoyable. I loved that you emphasized enough on your cliche while still making it as realistic as possible. All in all, WOW!

GREAT JOB!

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pencil_gal September 30 2007, 13:26:29 UTC
Brilliant Isa!, Absolutely, and utterly brilliant :D

This was an awesome twist to the cliche. I loved it :D

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