Bones Fic: Nightswimming

Sep 23, 2012 23:11

Title: Nightswimming
Author: Ayiana

Rating: G
Wordcount: about 900
Spoilers: Through 8.01
Genre: Missing scene fic for 8.01, The Future in the Past

A/N1: Many, many thanks to amilyn for her spur of the moment beta talents and suggestion of the perfect title.
A/N2: Readers beware, my approach to this one was a little unconventional and may not suit all ( Read more... )

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metwin1 September 24 2012, 03:38:25 UTC
Very very nice. I like the touch of angst and the mostly hopeful thread weaving in this story.

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ayiana September 24 2012, 12:04:50 UTC
Thank you! It didn't come out at all the way I thought it would, so it's a relief to know that you enjoyed it.

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tempertemper September 24 2012, 12:34:34 UTC
This is gorgeous. I love that you acknowledge how weird it must be for Brennan to be back in their home too, I don't think I've seen many other fics do that.

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ayiana September 24 2012, 14:16:36 UTC
Thank you! It would be a little weird, wouldn't it? Three months is such a long time. She'd be thrilled to be back and yet there'd have to be somewhat of a surreal feeling to it all. So glad you liked it. Also? I love your icon.

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tempertemper September 24 2012, 15:41:22 UTC
Thank you!

Some here and here. At some point I'll put them into a proper post :)

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dabhug September 24 2012, 14:27:26 UTC
Very nice.

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ayiana September 25 2012, 11:49:55 UTC
Thank you. :)

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tuberose08 September 24 2012, 14:54:53 UTC
In a situation like this there is bound to be emotional fall-out, uncertainty and resentment, and I think you captured their feelings very well.

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ayiana September 25 2012, 11:51:30 UTC
Thanks. Though I have to say, last night's episode had some pretty painful fall-out. I rather think I might prefer my version.

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gina227 September 24 2012, 15:24:15 UTC
I haven't really read any Bones fic in ages, but I love this. So much. I especially love that she doesn't argue with him when he says nothing will change his feelings for her. She's come such a long way.

On a completely unrelated note, I have to tell you that I just this past weekend randomly stumbled onto your SG-1 fics, via someone's rec list. I've only recently watched Stargate and gotten into the fic. (Yes, I am all kinds of late to that particular party, but better late than never.) Anyway, your Sam & Jack had me squeeing and grinning to myself like a loon all weekend.

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ayiana September 25 2012, 13:04:10 UTC
Thank you! I'm so, so glad you liked it.

Also, SG1. I loved Sam and Jack. So much. I had tons of fun writing about them, and it's a joy to know that somebody out there is still reading. The fandom has tons of great fic. I'm sure you'll have a lovely time catching up.

As to the being late to the party thing, it's a disease I'm often afflicted with as well. Sometimes it's nice, though. You get to take in the canon and its fanworks at your own pace.

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