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Fic: Beta, the Blessed 9/?

Sep 02, 2011 23:54

Title: Beta, the Blessed 9/?

Pairings: Yunjae

Summary: In this world's society, the Gods had placed three genders on Earth, the males, females and the beta males. And this is the story of one of the blessed ones, the beta males.

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: AU!

Disclaimer: Not mine. :(

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pairing: yunho/jaejoong, fic: beta the blessed [dbsk], fandom: kpop

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ayusfiction September 5 2011, 14:11:28 UTC

I hope there is a good reason too! It will be revealed in the next chapter! Please look forward to it!

Thank you for reading and commenting, hun!

hitomi2oo7 September 2 2011, 16:54:07 UTC

An Update ~YAY~ 8DDD
I am glad to see You back and kicking~! lol
And this part was so saddening TT
Poor JJ~! He must suffer so much and yet he blames himself coz he can't do much to help Yunho... and now the intimate Yunho-Heechul hug *facepalms* This is getting just better and better... =.=

ayusfiction September 5 2011, 14:14:04 UTC

Yayyy~ I'm back, yes I'm but not for long though. I had a little break between my exams and now I'm slowly reverting back to my exam-mode again. Hopefully, I would be able to come up with the next chapter before I leave for a while again!

Sigh~ It's been such a difficult road for Yunjae lately, ne! Dont worry I wish to make it pick up later on! So stay tuned, bb!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

yozora_yume September 2 2011, 17:32:41 UTC

:( I really wonder if Heechul's a bad character in this one or what, anyway thanks for the update!

ayusfiction September 5 2011, 14:15:53 UTC

Hmmm...well, we just cant judge heechul yet. Wait for more chapters to full decipher whether he is truly bad or not. I usually hate villains but they are so necessary to the plot.

Thanks for reading, hun~!

aisyah_legend September 2 2011, 17:48:06 UTC

Ahhh yunho ahh!!! Eiii..feel like want to punch him..
Hopefully jaejoong will be strong..
And heechul..that vixen..I knew he's up to something..grrrr

ayusfiction September 5 2011, 14:16:51 UTC

Gah~ I felt like hitting him too while I was writing this! Hopefully things turn out to be better for Yunjae the next chapter!

Let's wait and see! Thanks for reading!

miszc September 2 2011, 17:49:37 UTC

Oh! :D
More drama in this chappieee!
Poor Jaejae... Since last two chapters ive been expecting him to breakdown for being neglected, and he finally did.
BTW.. i really LOVEEEE the way Kangin try to make up to Jae! ^_^ Hehe. Its sooo sweet! :D And unbelievable? I didn't expect him to be that ~~ funny?! x)

And....... there better be a reason for the hug!! Honestly.. Jae must feel more hurt because the door to Yunho's room appear to be more 'open' to Chul than himself. Yunjae's conflict... *sigh*

Oh... U're FAST this time..

ayusfiction September 5 2011, 14:20:40 UTC

Drama...drama...drama! That's one of my favourite genres hahaha~

Yeshhh, I was really wondering when I should make JJ cry. I didnt want him to come across as a childish little brat because I hoped that his character would be someone who is pretty mature for his age.

And I also debated if I should make Kangin a cold-hearted guard but I thought it would be fun if Kangin was mix of both sweet and a bit of a meanie! Haha~ it would really spice things up alittle.

Heh...just hope things turn out better for Yunjae later on~!

Thanks for reading hun. Sorry my updating is so inconsistent, sometimes I take forever to update and sometimes it's a few days later~ ^^