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ayzilia

fic: Colors run prime (3/?)

Nov 27, 2011 10:57

Title: Colors run prime (3/?)
Author:ayzilia
Fandom: DCU
Paring: Tim/Kon
Rating: R, for language and themes
Word Count: 2,938
Summary: In the wake of the Wayne-Kryptonian Treaty, Tim and Kon struggle to adjust their dreams, prejudices, and expectations to fit into the scope of their new life together. A/N: This follows My kind is not your kind. Read that ( Read more... )

series: not your kind, tim drake-wayne, tim/kon, kon-el

Comments 34

arabella_w January 21 2012, 06:31:22 UTC

I'm new to this fandom and yours is the first fic I read and you totally got me hooked into this pairing for good.

I really hope you continue this, because it's awesome.

ayzilia August 31 2012, 04:52:10 UTC

Thank you so much for this very lovely comment! You make me blush. I just posted the first part a a prequel to this and more Tim/Kon are on the way!

jamakura March 20 2012, 00:26:48 UTC

I just found this story and read all of it voraciously. I really enjoyed it so far and hope more will be coming soon.

I like how you made Tim the paranoid freak he is not cute and scmoopy. Kon was greats as well.

ayzilia August 31 2012, 04:53:33 UTC

Squee! Thanks! Yah, Tim is a paranoid freak and Kon is an enthusiastic puppy of a person. More on the way, I promise!

jamakura August 31 2012, 23:34:13 UTC

YAY!!!!!!! Can't wait.... I've been stalking you looking for more!

lyo24girl May 31 2012, 05:45:50 UTC

This series is so epic...one of the most captivating and well-written I've ever come across. You have GOT to keep this going. xD

ayzilia August 31 2012, 04:54:33 UTC

Thank you for the encouragement! More story on the way!

Peace Arranged-Husbands review shadydarling July 18 2012, 17:02:42 UTC

This was beautiful! I like how Tim said that Kon's verbally said reasons for liking him are stupid and dangerous. Also, cuties! And being a creepy little marionette is also something heart clenching! Ah, I would enjoy reading more of this. Thank you for the chapters, they were entertaining! :)
Cuddly hugs!

Re: Peace Arranged-Husbands review ayzilia August 31 2012, 05:32:18 UTC

N'awww. Thank you for such a sweet comment! More story to come! Arguments and kisses and adorableness on the way.

kuonji14 August 19 2012, 07:18:21 UTC

Oh. Geez. Two gut-punches I was not expecting.

1) Kara setting Tim up was... somewhere between cute/playful and yet also despicable, considering Tim's position in their household. She (any of them) obviously is not understanding what a very real threat they all pose to Tim. I'll bet Lois being so comfortable with them has given them all sorts of wrong ideas about how they appear to the rest of the human race. New bulletin: Realizing that your legal husband, who can hold you down just by touching you, also wants to screw you is not happy-making, no matter how much the in-laws smile and feed you ( ... )

ayzilia August 31 2012, 05:22:37 UTC

Squee! Thanks for reading and commenting!

1) Yah, Kara creeped me out a bit when I was writing this. Kara especially, but Kon too, have a bit of "Ivory Tower Syndrome" going on. They just don't understand the big scary monster they've been made out to be. Not when most people they interact with praise them and consider them heroes.

They're the royalty of Metropolis and they understand how they view the bats, but they don't see how the reverse can be applied to themselves. They've honestly never questioned that they are the good guys.

2) Ah! Shiva's influence on Tim is one of my favorite things Chuck Dixon gave to Tim's character. Love it!

Reply/Answer: Tim is scared of actually having to fight Kon. He has no weapons in the gym with him. His best shot is trying to project calm and prevent the situation from escalating. That doesn't mean he's not freaking out internally and running through what he should do were he forced to fight. Also Kon really sucks at reading Tim's facial expressions and body language. He hasn't had to learn to ( ... )

kuonji14 August 31 2012, 08:39:43 UTC

1) Yeah, I didn't mention it before b/c I was concentrating on Tim, but I can definitely see the Supers' pov. To them, the Bats are completely incomprehensible. Tim's joke about kryptonite is about as distasteful to them as Kon's accusation to Tim. After Kara's revelation about being hunted, I kept thinking of the Superman/Batman book Search for Kryptonite, where Superman feels this horrible 'shame' and anger about how this one element can render him so completely helpless. To the Supers, Tim is an unstable factor, very possibly a spy or assassin, and they know they aren't mentally/strategically equipped to handle that. (I wonder if Clark feels it is unethical to x-ray scan Tim's packages from home ( ... )