WTML: Update

[azalea_j]

Chapter Four is UP!

Title: Where the Moon Lies
Warnings: Angst. Language. Violence (including blood).
Summary: Enter Jesse's first change.
Disclaimer: This is a work of Original Fiction. All characters and settings belong to the author Azalea J.
Final Word Count: Approx. 3 400

Link: This chapter and previous chapters can be found here. (Also

Comments

[angelkitty7888]

Gah!!! OMG!!!! at least you left it at not quite a cliffhanger.... Gods and goddess though!! wow!! i can't wait for more! but did you have to kill the horse? really? poor bree.... what's going to happen to the people who took them in? omg!!!!

but at least we finally get back to the others? Yay!!!

Still loving your style and decriptions! you tell a good story hunny!!

[azalea_j]

You are the first person to comment on the horse! I thought for sure everyone was going to berate me for killing the horse - but no one did.

Slightly disappointing, that.

Actually, I hadn't planned on killing Bree, it just sorta... happened. *Sheepish*

[angelkitty7888]

lol it's fine i was just surprised!

I looked up for a second and... spoil.

[animefreak242]

GAAAAAH! I haven't really gotten into who 'Bree' is, but you totally ruined that for me. *sobs*

[animefreak242]

I like the banner. I vote for different and colored font though. Maybe that would be better, you know? Make it stand out more...

Does it suck that I've only read like two paragraphs of your story? Work... >< It seems like when you're on vacation you have LESS time. Why is that?

[azalea_j]

Hey yeah, that's a good idea... maybe blue font? I shall fiddle!

Oh, I get you. Vacations never seems like vacations anymore. I cherish my weekends. :D