Cancer

[azazels_tail]

            “Shut up. Please. I’ve thought about it enough. You’re here now. That’s all that matters. Now we can talk, but just not about what could have been. Depression is a bitch, and I don’t want her getting her hands on you when I’m not here not fight her off.”

Frank looked at Gerard and nodded slightly. The sick man moved to the

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Re: :(

[azazels_tail]

Thanks for the comment =]
And I still haven't figured out how to post to communities, but I'll get there. I've figured out that my sister has an account.
*takes cookies* thank you.

Re: :(

[azazels_tail]

Not quite, but that may just be because I don't speak computer. I suck at basically all things technology. But I'm almost there, I just need to figure out how to use cuts.

[brookenox]

This really got to me :/
my mom died of cancer but she was the opposite of frank, she wanted to be up and living as normally as possible until she no longer could.
this is definitely going in my memories :)

[azazels_tail]

Aw, I'm so sorry about your mom. But thanks for the comment.

[clandestine13]

This is a really good story. ^_^

However, I hope you don't mind, but I spotted a few errors you might like to correct?
9th paragraph; typo- "Gerard's check" and "defiantly"
And Gerard's and Frank's should have apostrophes in case you meant several of them at one go :P
(not that I wouldn't mind reading me some of that, now)

[pansyxdaisy]

This was amazing. it puts me to shame -.-

i wish my writing was as beautiful but then again it would just defeat my purpose to tell you how wonderful your writing truely is.

umm, can you tell me how to make links that arent just www.- like how ur link says cancer.

this was amazing

-Much Love and Huggles, Breanna

[white_stripes3]

Right from reading the summary (and now ending line) of the story I knew that there will be some great writing going on.
This is a really great fic, it's like you captured a moment in time and sent us all hurling into space for a few minutes, captivated and moved by the power of your words.
Even though there was a few spelling mistakes here and there I really felt that you did a great job with basing this fic on their song "Cancer.", I could really see the scenario before my eyes. What kind of threw me off track was the phrase “No one should have to look at me. I’m awful just to see.. It just sounded too familiar, like something borrowed, y'know? I've heard the song like a million times and seeing it here was
a bit off-putting.
OVERALL, GREAT JOB!

(jeebus, I think this is the longest comment I've ever written on someone's fic ;D)