First try~

Mar 04, 2006 15:57

Here, near my home is
Where the wolf, like the flowers,
Blooms and grows native.

© 4:30pm, March 4, 2006 - Asher Gabrielle Stay

This is my first attempt at a haiku. Did I do it correctly?

~ Asher/Marathon/Wofly

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disia_gabriel March 4 2006, 14:27:12 UTC
*nods* The syllable pattern is right, and it looks damned good!

^_^

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olivetti250 March 16 2006, 16:04:44 UTC
Nice.

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