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matholwch February 11 2007, 01:58:33 UTC
Or, the story takes place during the end of an interplanetary war, where the members of the losing royal family had to evacuate or try to find some place of refuge, like Yoda from Star Wars. Of course, the government that replaced the previous one placed a huge bounty on the heads of the members of the old royal family. Now, Pink Haired Girl and Dark Haired Girl aren't related, but are best friends/lesbian lovers, due to the fact that she and Dark Haired Girl, along with her three friends (Archer Guy, Helmet Boy, and Glasses Lady) used to work for the royal family as body guards, who helped the members of the royal family split up along the star system. Of course, royal guards aren't really loyal guards if they aren't fed, so a conspiracy between the four and the new government occurs, and together (Without Dark Haired Girl's knowledge) to get the moolah. In this scene, Dark Haired Girl's younger brother-in-law, who is also one of the princes of the hunted royal family, was killed by Archer Guy using the "Hey, long time no see, let's ( ... )

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azn_incognito February 11 2007, 22:22:26 UTC
WTF. HAHAHAH. I love it. too much FFXII for you!!

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matholwch February 11 2007, 22:33:27 UTC
Unlike Final Fantasy, hopefully, your story doesn't have a Crystal, a Sword, and Feminine-looking men. (I'm still hoping for a fucking sexy Han Solo-esque male lead, tho. None of that Marcus Phoenix and any Bad Dude-esque characters, please. Archer Guy's enough.)

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matholwch February 11 2007, 02:07:35 UTC
Ooh, I have another.

The four are archaeologists, and are trying to find a map to some artifact. Of course, they found... other things. Things that corrupted at least the head of the expedition, Archer Guy. In having been corrupt, he convinced the others that one of them, the fifth guy, is selling all the secrets to some rival group. He was shot down. Dark Haired Girl, being the lab girl, stayed at HQ, and is actually being transferred to another site and is going to miss her best friend/lesbian lover. Helmet Boy is stupid and immature, and only cared about shooting down Fifth Guy, but Pink Haired Girl has her doubts. She goes to the headquarters, under the pretext that she's doing Archer Guy's bidding, that is, finding out if Dark Haired Girl had something to do with the "betrayal", but in fact, she wants to get her opinion on the matter.

...eh... it's not so grand. Epics are usually hard to top, thus explaining this.

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azn_incognito February 11 2007, 22:23:46 UTC
but but...fifth guy is just Dark Haired Girl's shadow clone. lololol ;P

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gdg February 11 2007, 04:54:05 UTC
can't .. stop... looking at.. your... sexy... women... o.O

awesome job as always :)

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azn_incognito February 11 2007, 22:26:46 UTC
thanks! there'll be more to come! ;D

and thanks for the obi-wan prize. it just shipped in.

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jepps February 11 2007, 21:23:24 UTC
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Ty for assservice

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azn_incognito February 11 2007, 22:29:24 UTC
WTF! You're Alive. haha
You and I are like Alexi's only fans. lololol
I saved these just for you XD ;D


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jepps February 12 2007, 01:23:59 UTC
You're the best T^T/

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doctaj April 5 2007, 22:30:04 UTC
lol asssssserviceeeee

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