声をきかせて ; Introduction Chapter

[aznbissh]

It probably was going to be just an ordinary day right; you wake up one morning do your usual routine and walk out to face the day. "15 minutes till it starts!" A man running around the whole area screamed out.

"You hear that guys 15 minutes till the show starts" A tall boy wearing a very flashy costume repeated after getting a bottled water.

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Comments

[taylidy]

"That's right, Besides how CAN we fail..after all it's us." A very confident boy winked at them

They seem a bit...cocky ^^;
It was a cute start,
please write more~

[chinenmai]

good start!
can't wait for more ^^

[kodochalover]

ahh this looks so interesting ^^
thank you for the quick post~
yay :D

gambatte<3!

[saucecopter]

Very cute! :D Both "Kohaku" and "Ai" are my RL friends so they kinda made me read this fic. I liked it and hope you'll update soon, hoho. It's just that I noticed a few grammar/punctuation/sentence structure mistakes here and there. If you'd like, I could help you with them, since I am a total grammar-obsessed fool WTF. :D
Good job!

[aznbissh]

LOL.
omg! aha sure xDD
english fail -shoots-
you think i'd master english spending my entire life in Canada..

[yamapi96]

Haha yay I got chosen! I'm looking forward to reading the rest~ Oh btw you got my name wrong haha, it's Kohaku, and not Koharu like in My Girl xD I'm not as cute WAHAHA.

[aznbissh]

OH!
btw how is your name written?
Aizawa Kohaku
or
Kohaku Aizawa.

I sat here thinking about that xD

[yamapi96]

xD Write it the Japanese way, where the surname comes first, i.e. Aizawa Kohaku haha. Haha okay! I'm really looking forward to the rest of the fic, ganbatte ne!