声をきかせて ; Chapter Two

Jan 16, 2010 20:47

「Destiny has its ways; even when you're unaware of it.」

"It's like....he's not the not there anymore. He's not the same person that I..." The wind blew between the trees and whistled through the branches

"Maybe...I wasn't the one that was going to change him...Maybe I was just a friend and nothing more." The wind was still restless as she typed on ( Read more... )

fic:声をきかせて

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chinenmai January 16 2010, 20:14:52 UTC
ahh~ i got someone fired ~ =/
i really like the beginning =]
can't wait for the next one~ ^^

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chiyakenyu January 16 2010, 20:27:20 UTC
YAAAAYY!!! AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D

Now Rhea-chan is happy ^.^

Hahaha my intro is soo like me! :D I can imagine myself standing there! :D
I'm so in love with this!

Can't wait for the next one~

Love & peace!!

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aimix3 January 17 2010, 02:16:16 UTC
i like this story XD
i love how you start off the story i can imagine it
the wind blowing... hehe
cant wait for the next one ^^

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aznbissh January 17 2010, 02:23:44 UTC
hehe thanks.
it's good to be very descriptive in your stories & add detail with the setting, person, and emotion. ^^.

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kerokerokun January 17 2010, 04:12:46 UTC
one word.

amazing

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