[fic] Experimenting with Writing Styles (continued)

Aug 13, 2008 05:01


Prompt: I'll think about it tomorrow *courtesy of the SJ Random Pairing Generator
Title: Dark Chocolate
Genre: Romance//Angst
Rating: G?
Pairing: One-sided YeTeuk, implied KangTeuk and Hanry
Summary: He watches them with sad eyes but doesn’t do anything and you can’t help the question that slips past your lips for the thousandth time.

*Author’s Comment: ( Read more... )

yeteuk, why do you love?, fanfiction

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xvxkuromi August 14 2008, 21:42:44 UTC
-sqees-

XDDD
I read the 1st one, and felt my heart broked a little DDDD;
but then i read this one!! <333
YAYS for the luv of YeTeuk XDD
But its still a shame that they both dont know their luv for each other DDD;
oh wells ~~

but I <3 it ~~
-cuddles-

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aznk_popaddict August 14 2008, 21:44:23 UTC
Wao, you're fast x333

No, it's supposed to be happy at the end...

You're probably confused now xDD

Thanks for reading^^

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xvxkuromi August 14 2008, 21:50:20 UTC
o_____o''

ur right, i prob am confused XDD
So i demand a sequel where Teuk actually tells Sungie that he luvs him tooo!!! XDDDDD

Of course ~ Im always quick and I have good timing when it comes to YeTeuk and Dream Threesome XDDD

ur welcome~
And thank u for posting ~ I really enjoyed reading it <3

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aznk_popaddict August 14 2008, 21:53:48 UTC
You shake your head and wrap your arms around him comfortingly before letting him escape to his room for solace. But not before you whisper something into his ear that surprises him.

He looks at you with shocked eyes before smiling slightly and you return the gesture with one of your own.

"I'll think about it tomorrow, I promise."

What Hannie whispers into Teukie's ear is that Sungie does love him and he tells Teukie to tell Sungie.

Does it make more sense now? x333

Heehee, you're welcome^^

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aznk_popaddict August 15 2008, 03:21:14 UTC
Oh, annyeong^^

Haven't seen you in awhile x33 I missed you

I'm glad you like it^^

I hope the ending wasn't confusing for you...>.< because i think it might've been a little bit misinterpreted

*hugs you* i miss having you around xDDD

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aznk_popaddict August 15 2008, 03:30:08 UTC
Oh? You must be very busy.

I'm surprised you can still be updating fics regularly if you're that busy xDD

Amazing x33

I'm working on another fic^^ I have a list of requests right here

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g_myzo August 15 2008, 03:36:40 UTC
forgot to say in the first one, i like how you started off the fic. it really sets the atmosphere like elsewhere there's laughter and life as compared to the quietness in the kitchen that amplifies Yesung's feelings.
pretty sleeping jongwoon...
anyway, Yay that this time we know teukie actually likes him back ^^

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aznk_popaddict August 15 2008, 03:46:43 UTC
I was aiming for that effect^^

I'm glad you liked how it ended...Hannie told him that Sungie loves him back and told him to confess...well that's what I was thinking of when I wrote this^^

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amine87 August 15 2008, 04:25:23 UTC
oh oh oh O_O
so there will be sequel rite? coz it hasn't finished yet xD

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aznk_popaddict August 15 2008, 04:34:14 UTC
Maybe, maybe there will be a sequel x33

If I get motivated, heehee

Good night I have to sleep now xDD

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mikudaisuki August 15 2008, 09:03:50 UTC
KYAH!!! I love the second version too! So many possibilities!

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aznk_popaddict August 15 2008, 15:07:06 UTC
Heehee I'm glad you love it x33

The second version was supposed to end somewhat happily^^ At least that was the effect I was aiming for, hehe

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