Comments | aznxravah296: Fic: Drop

aznxravah296

Fic: Drop

Aug 05, 2009 21:46

Title: Drop
Characters: Jessica and Tiffany
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
Summary: When betrayal strikes, how does Jessica deal with it?
A/N: Um, after reading an angst fic and watching a little bit of 'Soul', I felt like writing angst. This is the first time I wrote angst, so excuse me if it isn't really depressing enough, and don't kill me. ^^;

( Inhaling probably what might be my last breath, I motioned my right leg forward, letting it hover in the open space before me. )

fandom: snsd, pairing: jessica/tiffany, genre: romance, genre: angst, one-shot

Comments 7

xallysex August 6 2009, 06:35:38 UTC

Good god, Tracy. ;~;

It just had to end with suicide, didn't it? -.- I've never, in my life, read a fic (for both boy and girl) that actually had someone in it kill themselves. That's just too much. x__x AND YOU CHOSE A BUILDING TOO. WTF IS WRONG WITH JOO D':

So ya, I checked it over for you, and it's definitely angsty enough, but ya you know me, I'd give you more praise if it wasn't written in first-person. :'D I'm so mean aren't I? :x

-goes back to plotting before she gets killed-

xallysex August 6 2009, 06:37:12 UTC

God damnit, I can't get over the fact how depressing Jessica is when she's freakin' denying Tiffany. ;____________________; It's like...if I replaced those jessica and tiff with my otps, I'd be bawling, gosh damnit AHHH >w

aznxravah296 August 6 2009, 07:09:31 UTC

Lol, yay! I has successfully written angst! :D Btw, blame the drama 'Soul'. The graphics in that drama is incredibly...graphic. ;; Plus, that's where I got the suicide idea, lol. Gosh, ur so picky with the style of writing, are't ya? And you say I'm narrow-minded. >< Anyways, thnx for checking for me and you better post up ch 2 for Incense. :3

raplaplacp August 6 2009, 21:20:03 UTC

It was sad but I loved the way Jessica was so unforgiving. She wouldn't even let Tiffany explain. I don't know it just struck me that way. I loled at her calling TaeYeon a bitch. I knew it TaeTae before you even said her name. Good Job.

aznxravah296 August 6 2009, 22:29:26 UTC

Hehe, thanks for liking my attempt at angst! :3 Yeah, somehow Taeny always pops into my head if I'm not thinking of JeTi. x3

thenexmessiah August 12 2009, 05:26:13 UTC

ahhhh poor sica! D:
but it was really good! :) i love the way sica wouldn't listen to fany at all.
why is angst so good to read? D:

aznxravah296 August 12 2009, 23:24:14 UTC

Lol, thanks!~ o(^.^)o I really didn't want to kill Sica like that, but I guess that's how angst works. ;-;