555 (Entanglement)

[azrael1111]

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my third short film "555" is complete and has been uploaded to youtube. i left out several elements including the talking furniture and demonic buddhist salesman, but otherwise i feel pretty happy with carrying through my initial idea. i am not completely satisfied with the overall result but i do feel it is a great improvement from my first two

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[madhuri]

That's great, Ezra! I pictured Jenn in it when I read your script too! She was awesome in it!
I like how your frames are un-centered and the lighting effects.
Just one thing is I could only understand what WILD was saying because I read the script- the effect on her voice it cool sounding, but a bit strong so its difficult to understand.
Overall, though, a fantastic job on it!

[azrael1111]

thank you carrie ann :)
it was funny telling jenn what to do since she just had to lay there mostly... "no, no move your eyes over there!"
i used a stand with multicolored rotating lights i got to display one of jenn's crystals for the flashlight effects on everything.
the vocal effect IS a little stronger on WILD's voice and i hadn't noticed it as much probably because i was so used to what she was saying. i wanted it to be stranger but still understandable. its good to know how it comes across to you... thanks for letting me know what you thought :)

[madhuri]

Well, I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to more of your films!

[eyehue]

absolutely brilliant! love the tone, mood and feeling of it all. great work! keep making movies!

[azrael1111]

thank you kendall. there was a certain element of suprise in working on all of the elements individually and combining them afterwards to see how they fused. i think that created an overall vibe that no one element seemed to have. sorry i took so long to respond... we just settled into our new home :)
i'm glad you like it!