Comments | azraelz_angel: FIC: To Leave His Mark (Jared/Jensen) RPS

azraelz_angel

FIC: To Leave His Mark (Jared/Jensen) RPS

Feb 27, 2011 21:57

TITLE: To Leave His Mark ( Read more... )

warning: rps, challenge: salt_burn_porn, pairing: jensen/jared

Comments 43

locknkey February 28 2011, 06:31:39 UTC

Hot and well written. Loved the last line.

azraelz_angel March 2 2011, 00:04:43 UTC

Thanks! :) The last line might be my favorite part too!

peepingdru February 28 2011, 09:12:09 UTC

SOOOOOO GOOOOOD....SOOOOOOOOOOO PHEW!!!::)))

azraelz_angel March 2 2011, 00:04:58 UTC

*beams* Thank you for the review. Glad you liked it.

lavishsqualor February 28 2011, 12:22:13 UTC

Oh my. fucking. goodness. This is exactly my cup of tea. I just love, love, love it!

Like agh! Poor boys.. You made it so easy to just feel their pain! while at the same time it was super hot. Ngh.

azraelz_angel March 2 2011, 00:05:45 UTC

Your icon is made of win.

And yeah, I was really not feeling a pleasant, funny porny fic, so the poor boys got tortured.

Glad it worked for you!

wendy February 28 2011, 13:43:32 UTC

Jared tilted his head to the side to stare at their rings, wishing, not for the first time, that they’d exchanged them with each other rather than the wives they’d left behind in L.A.

Oh the regret. *clutches heart*

This remains intimate and sexy despite the angst. I like how you have Jared so flipped and regretful, and Jensen so matter-of-fact. It makes an interesting contrast.

azraelz_angel March 2 2011, 00:06:56 UTC

Thanks for the review Wendy! I love this challenge and stepping outside my normal writing-zone to complete it.

Poor boys. *huggles them*

equally_dour February 28 2011, 16:04:46 UTC

That was so hurty but beautifully written. Nicely done. :)

azraelz_angel March 2 2011, 00:07:35 UTC

Thank you! Poor boys, I didn't mean to make them all angsty, but the prompt kinda demanded it.