Bust and Boom

[azul_bleu]

So, yeah. Hi. Have some pointless fluff. :3

Title: Bust and Boom
Author: azul_bleu
Pairing: Clyde/Craig
Rating: PG-13 for bad words
Wordcount: 2030

Comments

[hollycomb]

I love this so much, oh man. Funny and cute, and all the beats felt right, the character voices were great. I love Craig's 'actual happy' smile at the end, too, aww.

[azul_bleu]

Yaaay! This is my first time writing them so I'm THRILLED that you thought their voices were okay.

[w0rmsign]

Clyde is on the debate team <333 He is, he has words, who the hell needs maths?

Unconscious Kenny, hahah

I loved Clyde punching Cartman :O

Oblivious Stan and Kyle, adorable!

Clyde's shrieking and blurting out truths at the end is fantastic :]

SMILING CRAIG

Lovely first foray! This is really sweet <3

[miaoujones]

Clyde is on the debate team <333 He is, he has words, who the hell needs maths?

This, predictably, is what I also responded to most immediately. ♥

[w0rmsign]

:D

[azul_bleu]

So happy you liked it! I totally don't see Clyde as an aggressive jock. He had a colostomy; who plays football with a stoma?? And yay, you noticed Kenny :3

[miaoujones]

There's so much I love about this. Like the entire thing, and also specifically:

- When he jacks off later, it’s not to Korean lesbians. It’s to noogies with happy endings.

That's what I want to call this pairing now: "noogies with happy endings."

- That Butters is the one he confesses to (because in canon, Butters always seems the first to know things); and that Butters continues to sit with Clyde at Stark's Pond (he and Clyde seem to hang out some in canon, even if they're not best friends, and Butters is such a nice kid anyhow I can really see that).

- Clyde's parents. Oh man, I love them so much! <3 That's just how I see it happening, too.

- Like w0rmsign mentioned: Clyde on the debate team. I often feel lonely in fandom with my belief that Clyde is not dumb and might actually be kind of smart. So that little thing is almost my favorite part, except for this:

- Craig loves Clyde, too. Oh my heart! ♥

Thanks for writing this. I seriously enjoyed it!

[azul_bleu]

*happy dance* Yay, I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks so much for letting me know which bits specifically! The noogie line is one I'm pretty happy with, so i'm so glad to know it worked in context. Also was worried about Butters, so yay.

I totally think Clyde could be on the debate team! Why the hell not? Other characters get random extra-curriculars. (Although, if it's anything like my debate team was in school, you don't have to be THAT smart to be on it :p )

:D

[cr00kshanks]

FIRST OFF, I love you so, so much for writing my OTP.
Secondly, I love you even MORE for doing it wonderfully.
This was great. Everything was perfect. Good job!