Aoi/Uruha - Gazette - Kryptonite - One-shot

Jun 15, 2008 00:52

 
Title: Kryptonite
Chapters: One-shot
Author: Azura Loire
Genre: angst
Warnings: not so happy, really. hints of self harm
Rating: PG-13 i guess
Pairings/Characters: Aoi/Uruha

Disclaimer: don't own the characters but the story is mine
Synopsis: "But tonight the story’s plot held a sickening turn. Superman had become the victim. It was the hero that now ( Read more... )

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hyacinthdreams June 15 2008, 12:48:58 UTC
I really like it. Post it to communities if you want. It does have a feel of a drabble, and maybe it should need a second part but I can take it as it is. I don't mind the angst..in fact it makes it all better. I really enjoyed reading it ^^

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azuraloire June 15 2008, 16:40:37 UTC
yeah, it was originally suppose to be a drabble
but then felt too long so i cut some and stopped it
then...i dunno XD
but thanks for the input

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azuraloire July 1 2008, 04:36:26 UTC
no, thank YOU!
^_^

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theklewerz June 15 2008, 16:58:05 UTC
I kinda curios the reason why Aoi did that....
but it's nice! I love your writing

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azuraloire July 1 2008, 04:37:43 UTC
thank you!
mayeb someday it will be revealed why...

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scottskydweller June 15 2008, 17:20:04 UTC
it was sad, yet it seemed to appear so perfectly in the words you used to weave this one shot.

leaving at this point, makes it an open ending for your readers to determine the conclusion themselves, with the endless possibilities.

no one says that all fic have to end with a conclusion and cannot leave it lingering...

however, if you really feel that it is inadequate, no one is stopping you from writing part 2 as well...

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azuraloire July 1 2008, 04:39:28 UTC
thank you very much.
yeah, i don't know if ill really make another part to this or not.
if i do, it will be way down the road

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kawaii_shaii June 15 2008, 17:49:52 UTC
I really like this... I hope you do post a part 2. <3

I hope whatevers going on will be okay. <3 Although, if it's related with "Starve me beautiful" I suppose it never will.. .____. <3

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azuraloire July 1 2008, 04:42:07 UTC
thanks.
im not sure if there's gonna be a part 2
but if there is, it will be way down the road.
and it wasn't intended to be related to starve me beautiful
but who knows, eh...

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