[FIC] First Crush, JaeSu, Secret Santa

Dec 24, 2008 09:42

Title: First Crush
Pairing: JaeSu
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, AU
A/N: For Secret Santa 2008 on the hug______ comm.

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fandom, dbsk, !oneshot, #jaesu, !fanfic

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enchanted1312 December 26 2008, 00:36:22 UTC
oh, that kinda hurts. kinda melancholy feeling, like going through pieces or flashes of pictures through my mind. something like a flipping book. junsu's way of expressing, i mean, your way of expressing it, just wow. i guess he couldn't deal with the fact he's just not meant to be with jae.

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azurehook December 27 2008, 00:36:52 UTC
Right, it goes from present to past as he has flashbacks, the moments and memories coming back at him.

I think in a way, he did deal with it, or at least tried to, by not disclosing the photo. But it's difficult regardless when you believe in something so strongly.

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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roselit December 26 2008, 07:14:24 UTC
ahh, this hurts!! ;__;! oh junsu.. ;;

& this is definitely awesome for your first jaesu!! ^^! ♥♥♥ loving the angst~ *__*

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azurehook December 27 2008, 00:38:09 UTC
ToT and yes, Junsu is in hurt. This was the first time I ever did full out angst, and yeah, no happy endings, not really.

Thank you so much!!! *GLOMPS TACKLES YOU* <3333 so happy that you enjoyed it~~ and I'm always inspired by you and Milena, which I hope to see more on plurk XD

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roselit December 27 2008, 05:07:45 UTC
You did awesomely for your first angst!! Truly. :D But hurts so good~ ♥ really makes you want to hug Junsu.

*GLOMP TACKLES!!* <333 *blush* Hee~ ^^;; *definitely wants more Jaesu on plurk!!* You can definitely expect more angst, ahh omg. XDD ♥

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