i read the whole story and i am in love... i am still abit like brain dead on when chunnie said the why are there two thing in the sketch but w/e. you give a good example damnit, nice short chapters yet still i got everything i needed from them... i need to learn how to write like that.
but the story was great and i'm glad i stumbled upon it yay XD keep writing ya hear?
You ish evil. >< I read the whole thing in one go and - I still haven't done any of my homework. x__________x
You know, this is really ingenious. It's kind of amazing the way you write, the way thigns are revealed one by one without you actually writing it. Like the "Why are there two?" thing. I was waiting for you to make Yoochun say what the "two" was supposed to mean, but then BAM! I got it. 8D
I would write you a much, much better comment if I had the time. But I've got an English + French disposition to write. -pouts- You know, I could quote so much from this, except I can't really choose. I think my favourite moment in the whole thing is when Changmin's licking salt off of his wrist. o_o -drools- But I really like the part with the boxers too. :D
♥♥ (x four thousand seven hundred thirty nine. But I don't want to heartspam your thread xD).
omg, wow, all in one go! and er, sorry?? It is one of my longer completed works...
*blushes* thank you! that's definitely something I strive for, so to hear you say that makes me really happy. ^_^
i was worried about it at first, if it would be too subtle but I'm glad you got it~ :D
This is lovely enough XD and I totally understand about the work... I have some presentations I need to work on tonight, unfortunately. hahah, mmm, Changmin tongue action is always smexy good stuff. yup, he was wearing Tommy Hilfiger boxers that day XD.
thank you so much!!! *is heart attacked in a good way* LOL. i'm so glad you enjoyed it~~
XDD Couldn't help it. And I just reread it all. -sigh-
But really, you wrote that part really, really well. And it makes the reader feel smart when they finally figure out the puzzle, without the author having to say it. :D
Changmin tongue action leaves me x_____________x.
You know, the day after I read this fic, right? :D I went out to the busstop, and usually there's just random posters of movies and stuff. But that day, there was a TOMMY HILFIGER poster. XD I went o_____________o. Before I remembered that, you know, Changmin isn't the only one who wears those. But my mind now automatically connects Tommy Hilfiger to Changmin. 8D
LMFAO. That's great! hahaha. I'm not sure if Min actually wears Tommy, but it's a classy brand and the logo's pretty easy to recognize. It's sad, but I haven't seen as many boxer shots from the T concert like Chun and Su (I think they're sporting CK or Emporio Armani haha).
aaaawwww sweet fic. Love how everything work and how Yoochun pull bit by bit the natural and lovely Changmin out of his comfort zone. Like it very much
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but the story was great and i'm glad i stumbled upon it yay XD keep writing ya hear?
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Glad you enjoyed it! Oh, the two things in the sketch--Yoochun was trying to tell Min why does he have two identities. Sorry if that wasn't clear ^^;;
Thank you so much~~~I have more plunnies so no worries; I hope to write more.
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You know, this is really ingenious. It's kind of amazing the way you write, the way thigns are revealed one by one without you actually writing it. Like the "Why are there two?" thing. I was waiting for you to make Yoochun say what the "two" was supposed to mean, but then BAM! I got it. 8D
I would write you a much, much better comment if I had the time. But I've got an English + French disposition to write. -pouts- You know, I could quote so much from this, except I can't really choose. I think my favourite moment in the whole thing is when Changmin's licking salt off of his wrist. o_o -drools-
But I really like the part with the boxers too. :D
♥♥ (x four thousand seven hundred thirty nine. But I don't want to heartspam your thread xD).
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*blushes* thank you! that's definitely something I strive for, so to hear you say that makes me really happy. ^_^
i was worried about it at first, if it would be too subtle but I'm glad you got it~ :D
This is lovely enough XD and I totally understand about the work... I have some presentations I need to work on tonight, unfortunately. hahah, mmm, Changmin tongue action is always smexy good stuff. yup, he was wearing Tommy Hilfiger boxers that day XD.
thank you so much!!! *is heart attacked in a good way* LOL. i'm so glad you enjoyed it~~
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But really, you wrote that part really, really well. And it makes the reader feel smart when they finally figure out the puzzle, without the author having to say it. :D
Changmin tongue action leaves me x_____________x.
You know, the day after I read this fic, right? :D I went out to the busstop, and usually there's just random posters of movies and stuff. But that day, there was a TOMMY HILFIGER poster. XD I went o_____________o. Before I remembered that, you know, Changmin isn't the only one who wears those.
But my mind now automatically connects Tommy Hilfiger to Changmin. 8D
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:D thank you~! I'm glad it worked :)
hahaha, I hope it's in a good way~~
LMFAO. That's great! hahaha. I'm not sure if Min actually wears Tommy, but it's a classy brand and the logo's pretty easy to recognize. It's sad, but I haven't seen as many boxer shots from the T concert like Chun and Su (I think they're sporting CK or Emporio Armani haha).
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Love how everything work and how Yoochun pull bit by bit the natural and lovely Changmin out of his comfort zone.
Like it very much
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and HOMG that ICON! XDDD perfect.
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