FIC: Riposte [Logan/Remy] NC-17 [Comicverse]

[azurine]

Title: Riposte
Author: Azurine
Email: intentionallynaughty @ yahoo.com
Website: Teethmarks
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Logan/Remy. Remy POV.
Summary: "Logan's there when Remy gets back to his hotel room." Sequel to "Parry & Thrust."
Disclaimer: Marvel owns them. No harm intended. No profit made.
Feedback: Would be lovely.
Archive: Yes to the

Comments

[apathocles]

I was just about to get to doing the beta, and then I saw that you'd posted the final version, so I guess I won't worry about it. ;)

I honestly don't think I could've made much in the way of suggestions, though -- it's lovely. And hot. Can't forget hot. *g* I also have a fondness for fic with unusual storylines, so this story definitely appealed to me in that respect, too.

I particularly liked the 'Remy is a seducer, Logan is a taker' section, and was a little worried when, at first, I couldn't find it in the final version. *g* But yeah, those few paragraphs really rang true, for me, and I also loved the language and imagery involved.

Thank you for writing this! (Between this and the nude pics of the French rugby team, I should be having happy dreams tonight. *g*)

[azurine]

I was just about to get to doing the beta, and then I saw that you'd posted the final version, so I guess I won't worry about it. ;)

Heh. No.

I honestly don't think I could've made much in the way of suggestions, though -- it's lovely. And hot. Can't forget hot. *g* I also have a fondness for fic with unusual storylines, so this story definitely appealed to me in that respect, too.

I'm glad you liked the premise because I wasn't sure what people would think. It's so different from Parry & Thrust.

I particularly liked the 'Remy is a seducer, Logan is a taker' section, and was a little worried when, at first, I couldn't find it in the final version. *g* But yeah, those few paragraphs really rang true, for me, and I also loved the language and imagery involved.

I kept moving that around, and then realized exactly where it needed to be. Took a while, though. *g*

Thank you for writing this! (Between this and the nude pics of the French rugby team, I should be having happy dreams tonight. *g*)Ha! The French rugby team seems to

[lunaris1013]

Just the nummy treat I needed today!

I like the premise a lot. I can really see gigolo!Remy and his absolute love of women. The uncertainty in their relationship, the things that need to remain unspoken, the roles that are played. Then the belly rubs (which I am an absolute sucker for), and that lone kiss. The whole thing came together and just pinged for me.

This would work equally well as a stand-alone, not just as a follow-up to Parry and Thrust.

[lunaris1013]

Oh, and didn't you mean to date that October 2004?

[azurine]

Oh, and didn't you mean to date that October 2004?

Ha! Yes. I guess you can tell how long ago I started this fic. Thanks for pointing that out.

[azurine]

Just the nummy treat I needed today!
Whooo! Working on my Xavier characterization has paid off in unexpected ways!

I like the premise a lot. I can really see gigolo!Remy and his absolute love of women.
Excellent. I wasn't sure how well-received that would be, and I was especially worried that it might come across as misogynistic, because that was not my intention at all and I dislike that in slash fic.

The uncertainty in their relationship, the things that need to remain unspoken, the roles that are played. Then the belly rubs (which I am an absolute sucker for), and that lone kiss. The whole thing came together and just pinged for me.
Awww, you mentioned the kiss! *is a happy writer*

This would work equally well as a stand-alone, not just as a follow-up to Parry and Thrust.*nods* I nearly decided to skip mentioning it was the sequel, but the part about Remy seducing Logan into taking what he wanted is basically what Parry & Thrust was, so in the end I decided to tie these stories together even if it isn't readily obvious

[meret]

This is terrific! I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

[azurine]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[jjblazer]

A cold beer, ESPN, and impending sex. Give Logan a cigar right now and he might just do a cartwheel. Or maybe even smile.

tee hee!!!

loved the bit about remy the seducer, logan the taker. perfect.

a level greeting, simple acknowledgment. and then a single kiss. another perfect passage.

*is jealous*

love your stuff! loved this.

write more.

: )

[azurine]

loved the bit about remy the seducer, logan the taker. perfect.
Thank you. Those were the first words I wrote for this story, and it just went from there.

a level greeting, simple acknowledgment. and then a single kiss. another perfect passage.
*is jealous*

Hee! Just like Remy!

love your stuff! loved this.
write more.

Thank you. Hopefully the next story won't sit for over a year before I finish it. *g*

[xxtheroguexx]

Sorry about not getting a chance to get back to you before you posted this. Little guy is teething...nuff said..LoL

[azurine]

Sorry about not getting a chance to get back to you before you posted this. Little guy is teething...nuff said..LoL
No problem. I made do.

Anyways...I was so happy to see that you finally, finally wrote a sequel to "Parry & Thrust" since it is in the top 5 of my all time favorite X-Men fics (comic & movie..::grins::).
Awww, thanks!

I read it as a love story without all the flowery proclamations.
*nods nods nods*

I really liked that you showed that both Logan and Gambit loved women
I'm not a fan of misogyny in slash fic, so I guess that was my little statement on the fairer sex and how they can have power as well.

(I'd love to see you write the scene about how Gambit learned not to come to bed smelling like sex though).
Ha! I'm sure you can use your imagination.

I loved everything about this story and I even teared up at the end.
That's my favorite part, I think, though it did make me wonder if I'm turning into a big sap!

As for not being very smutty....It works here and I thought it was pretty damn hot for not being very

[deavento]

Oh, please do finish them! Every one you've written w/those two is amazing.

[azurine]

Oh, please do finish them! Every one you've written w/those two is amazing.

Thank you! I'm trying!