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brown_betty September 6 2005, 19:41:33 UTC
Oh my. I believe this utterly. It leaves me genuinely unsure. Is Bruce unused to emotional contact, scared of hurting Dick, worried about proprieties, worried about self-control? And Alfred! I love it.

Just a note. I'm pretty sure Marvel doesn't own them.

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azurine September 6 2005, 19:54:15 UTC
It leaves me genuinely unsure. Is Bruce unused to emotional contact, scared of hurting Dick, worried about proprieties, worried about self-control?

I can't tell you how happy this makes me, because I wanted it to be totally up to reader interpretation. Is it sad and sort of sweet, or slightly creepy? It all depends on what people want to see.

I purposely didn't say too much about this one in the headers--and didn't post it to the genfic community--so as to not color how anyone read it.

Just a note. I'm pretty sure Marvel doesn't own them.

*facepalm*

This is what comes of copy/pasting headers rather than writing new ones. I'm reminded of the time I once claimed a story had been posted in the previous year. You think I'd learn to double-check.

Thanks for catching that. All fixed!

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brown_betty September 6 2005, 20:17:18 UTC
I purposely didn't say too much about this one in the headers--and didn't post it to the genfic community--so as to not color how anyone read it.

Yeah, I hear you. I recently gave up labelling my fic beyond content warning/no content warning. I really like ambiguity.

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spade September 7 2005, 04:26:36 UTC
Ah, I'm so glad to see some more writing from you!

Sad? Sweet? Creepy? Ehh, I can't make up my mind how I see this one.

It's been a long time since he's been hugged, except by Alfred, and Alfred's hugs are butler hugs.

And I do like this line. ^_^

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azurine September 7 2005, 15:26:02 UTC
Ah, I'm so glad to see some more writing from you!

Awww, thank you!

Sad? Sweet? Creepy? Ehh, I can't make up my mind how I see this one.

That makes me so happy. *g*

And I do like this line. ^_^

I'm so glad you mentioned that one!

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blufiction September 12 2005, 06:04:56 UTC
Good story :)

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azurine October 21 2005, 18:41:14 UTC
Thank you. :)

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musesfool November 9 2005, 16:20:55 UTC
Here from crack_van and eek! Creepy and sad and ... yeah, creepy.

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azurine November 11 2005, 17:34:24 UTC
Thank you! And thanks for the rec. :)

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poisontaster November 9 2005, 21:39:03 UTC
Wandered by on crack_van's rec. I REALLY like the layered ambiguity here. It's perfect for the relationship between them, and the characters as seen by fandom in general. It truly is/can be whatever you choose to project onto it. Excellent.

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azurine November 11 2005, 17:36:22 UTC
I'm so thrilled it worked. Thanks so much.

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