Almost flying (one shot)

Aug 10, 2009 21:57

***Taemin POV

Fly…

I really want to fly…

It was me again. Alone in this dancing studio. Music overflowed in my head, I could hear nothing but the magical sounds of Yiruma’s piano. Jumped. I jumped so high, trying to free myself from the gravity.

I really want to fly…

The landing was perfectly. Just as my feet met the ground, another ( Read more... )

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intricate_y August 10 2009, 16:13:48 UTC
Omo~ it's a really pretty story.

Even if you weren't confident with posting this, you did.
It was really cute and I just adore 2min.

There are errors but you'll get better! ^ ^

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azuyaraven August 11 2009, 01:56:50 UTC
Thanks a lot. I hope I could write better soon :")

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newschoollove August 11 2009, 11:35:33 UTC
i'm literally crying, from so much emotion, so don't worry that's a good thing (:

woww first time? applause for your 'fly' concept. love your style of writing. keep it up (::

can't believe this is your first ... I LIKED IT VERY MUCH
<3

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anggie_sam August 11 2009, 12:44:01 UTC
i love this! XD
i like it how you described taemin's feeling :)
2min love is just too sweet~ XD

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azuyaraven August 11 2009, 15:41:11 UTC
thanks so much for your comments, they're really touched me and encourage me a lot. I really appriciate it, and i will definitely try harder next time. You guys've made my day :)

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wickeddiaries November 23 2009, 12:28:38 UTC
awwwww.. that was so cute and nice i live it <3

your writing is wonderful,, you just have alotta grammar mistakes, i take it English isn't your 1st lang. ??

keep on writing =D

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