A Moment's Reprieve, 2/3

May 04, 2008 12:32

Title: A Moment's Reprieve, Part 2/3
Rating: PG
Genre: try not to suffocate in all the fluff
Pairing: roy/ed
Warning: i can't think of anything clever this time around...
Summary: Part 2 of a set of quasi-domestic ficlets. they can all be stand-alones, since they aren't part of an overall fic, i just grouped them together because they are similar ( Read more... )

fma, ed/roy

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ex_beautifu640 May 5 2008, 17:53:40 UTC
Very, very enjoyable. I do love these little snippets. You have a very good descriptive talent. You keep things economical and taut while still conveying just the right level of feeling.

B xxx

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 01:10:26 UTC
to be honest i still jump a little inside when i see that you've commented-i cannot express just how much i love your work, and if i've missed commenting on anything you've done recently it's cos of said icky computer virus

aw, seriously m'really glad you like it, and you have a perfect way of saying things in comments
thank ye kindly!

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b_borealis May 7 2008, 01:21:58 UTC
(lmao and as my friend just pointed out to me, in reference to my comment,: "dude, you realize you are fangirling over another fangirl, right?"
me: "yeah but..but...she's a really really good one!")

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b_borealis May 12 2008, 04:19:29 UTC
(agh sorry this response is so late!!)

hahaha, that made me get an idiotic smile!
thanks so much, glad you liked it!

and your comment has got to be one of the best, just because you called it awesome XD

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lynx212 June 3 2008, 02:28:55 UTC
Very well done and the imagery was great. I loved the interaction between the two alchemists it made them both seem very human very "real"

Kudos

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b_borealis June 6 2008, 06:00:32 UTC
aw thanks so much! im glad it seemed human and not just flat character mechanical sort of thing, i was a bit worried it would be out of character

heee i love those two! thanks again, and m'happy you liked it!

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