Comments | b_hallward: Fic: Lay of the White Hart (Merlin/Arthur)

b_hallward

Fic: Lay of the White Hart (Merlin/Arthur)

Mar 30, 2009 18:12

Summary: Arthur really is much better at noticing some things than others.

( Lay of the White Hart )

fixed-forms, tense: present, words: 100x14, pairing:arthur/merlin, drabble cycle, fanfic, words: 100, fanfic: merlin, merlin, drabbles

Comments 51

brightedelweiss March 31 2009, 00:02:03 UTC

Oh wow, this is was so well done. Everything's understated and underneath the words. I love it.

b_hallward March 31 2009, 04:16:51 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked this.

samescenes March 31 2009, 00:24:18 UTC

It's frustrating, how Merlin demands so much and yet so little.

That might be one of my fave lines, ever :)

b_hallward March 31 2009, 04:30:59 UTC

Thanks! The power dynamics between these two never cease to fascinate me, the layers of knowing, of control.

archaeologist_d March 31 2009, 00:41:31 UTC

This was lovely. Great job.

b_hallward March 31 2009, 04:38:48 UTC

Thank you!

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b_hallward April 1 2009, 01:04:44 UTC

Thank you! That is such a lovely thing to say. And Merlin must be such a puzzle to Arthur; the pieces don't ever quite add up and clearly Arthur realizes this even in the beginning.

I have a true weakness for textual spaces and how they get mapped out

Me, too. I find the interior spaces of texts to be hopelessly fascinating. It actually grew out of a much older academic interest.

pippopippo March 31 2009, 00:57:49 UTC

Really lovely. :)

b_hallward March 31 2009, 04:38:57 UTC

Thank you!