[Merlin] On the Proper Balance of the Elements (Merlin/Arthur, gen)

Jun 03, 2009 14:54

Summary: Merlin only shrugs in response, turning a page. "Gaius won't let me into the study again till I've read this." (Post series one). For bewarethesmirk.

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fanfic, words: 800-1000, genre: narrative, tense: present, fanfic: merlin, merlin, pairing:arthur/merlin

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glass_icarus June 4 2009, 15:11:03 UTC
oh, this is lovely. &hearts :D

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b_hallward June 6 2009, 15:56:09 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

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b_hallward June 6 2009, 15:57:52 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad the lazy, quiet atmosphere came through. And, while I like the adversarial nature of Merlin and Arthur's relationship, there is a charm to seeing what a moment of respite might look like.

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voldything June 6 2009, 15:22:05 UTC
oh, such wonderful descriptions!

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b_hallward June 6 2009, 15:59:11 UTC
Thank you! I couldn't write proper porn in time, so I had to settle for word!porn. *g*

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heartofoshun July 10 2009, 04:42:26 UTC
This is gorgeous. I absolutely love both the way you set the scene and get into Arthur's head. What he observes and what he misses are absolutely fascinating.

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