Flashfic: Lightness and Ardour and Heat (Merlin/Arthur, wing!verse AU)

Mar 24, 2009 14:40

Summary: In the words of the divine David, He maketh His angels spirits, and His ministers a flame of fire: and He has described their lightness and the ardour, and heat, and keenness and sharpness with which they hunger for God and serve Him. -- John of Damascus (AN: Same universe as Sublimity and By Means of Fire. For mossylawn. And honestly? This is all ( Read more... )

tense: present, genre: au, words: 100-200, pairing:arthur/merlin, fanfic, flashfic, fanfic: merlin, merlin

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veleda_k March 24 2009, 20:39:42 UTC
Oh my lord. (Er, no pun intended.) How is it that you can take a basic premise (wing!fic) that I have no interest in, then turn it in to something that pushes every one of my buttons?

Everything you give from this universe makes me want more.

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b_hallward March 25 2009, 01:51:59 UTC
Thanks! I still think that not being into wings, visually, makes it much easier. In fact, I'm sort of the last person I'd ever have expected to write wing!fic. Fandom is weird.

Everything you give from this universe makes me want more.

Yeah, it nags at me; I'm trying to figure out how not to make it turn all City of Angels.

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mossylawn March 24 2009, 21:16:47 UTC
I sob, sing and gasp with my utter and unadultered worship for you. Sweet Lord.... just, fuck this, you know?
I can't believe how much you can convey with so little. It's only a few lines, more a drabble than a ficlet maybe but they burn me like wildfire.

I don't feel the least bit guilty for enabling all this.

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b_hallward March 24 2009, 22:00:54 UTC
*glee* I loved your description so much--how Arthur becomes Merlin's one true faith; I'm just so glad to have captured something of that... that focus and keenness and divine hunger you implied. Merlin's idolatry.

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mossylawn March 24 2009, 22:14:07 UTC
I am so happy that I managed to be articulate enough to inspire something like that!
But honestly when I first watched a couple of episodes it was all I could think about, even as early as in Valiant, when Merlin looks at him it's both sensual and so, so pious. Arthur is the person Merlin kills for without even batting an eye-lid. I remember watching Gates of Avalon with my mom and when Merlin didn't exactly mess around with Sophia and Aulfric and both of us being like 'whoa scary', because sometimes Merlin's devotion borders on religious fanatism.

You are so fucking brilliant. God.

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b_hallward March 24 2009, 22:50:12 UTC
Exactly. That's what shocked me as I was writing this, how for all this is wing!fic AU, on some level I think this must be how Merlin feels, this sort of layered passion, the sensual and the ethereal. He's devoted to Arthur, to the man and the Future King and the deeply flawed person in a way that is terrifyingly without limits, whether it's telling him off for being a prat or killing his enemies in cold blood; devoted in the way of a man who has found his calling.

And I would love to see that moment when Arthur first gets a glimpse of this, the revelation it would be.

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samescenes March 24 2009, 23:35:26 UTC
asedkah;iruhg

...it's like I'm wordless with all this awesome.

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b_hallward March 25 2009, 01:54:00 UTC
Merlin on his knees is never a bad look; angel!Merlin on his knees for Arthur? Also not a bad look. *g*

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puckling March 25 2009, 02:26:59 UTC
And it's too much, the look on Merlin's face, terror and love and a vast awful devotion.

I really adore angel!Merlin.

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b_hallward March 25 2009, 06:26:20 UTC
He really is quite lovely -- I may just have to keep him around.

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wordsofastory July 23 2009, 22:38:43 UTC
Guh, hot. This AU is amazing. I don't really get wing-fic, in general, but I adore this.

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