[Fic] Last Night Part 1

Jan 29, 2011 17:32

Oh wow. A fic and not in the Scattered Petals verse. I'm proud of myself.

Title: Last Night
Author: b_sim
Characters/Pairings: Hideto x Satoru
Rating: NC-17. PG-13 for now.
Genre: AU-ish, general
Summary: Satoru, upset and down on his luck, meets a young, infuriating bartender who refuses to serve him the drink he orders. But Satoru's determined to ( Read more... )

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eadwine63 January 29 2011, 11:20:30 UTC
yay!! I like the story. I can totally picture a young Gackt sitting there... sulking about something that happened. Plus I think Gackt looked hot then... xD Very different, but stil hot. xD
I do hope you continue soon!!

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b_sim January 29 2011, 17:05:54 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's been a long time since I wrote something; I was afraid my skills had rusted, lol.

As of late, I've really been enjoying GACKT's Malice Mizer/Mizerable look. So young and so derp. And he always looks so fragile and emo, that it's so cute. ♥

Hopefully, I'll be able to! But school's a real big bitch and I really wanna write this fic properly. I've put a lot of thought into it and I don't want it come out horribly as some of my fics are known to have. :B

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eadwine63 January 29 2011, 23:25:19 UTC
which ones are supposed to be your horrible ones then? Tell me so I can read them and probably tell you otherwise....

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b_sim January 30 2011, 11:45:49 UTC
Ohgawd, there's quite a few which failed terribly. Unattractive Opposites, for example. And some chapters of Through the Years as well. Those were my first two series and I can't read through one chapter without getting the urge to trash it, srsly.

As for one-shots, there's Commiseration, Haircut Gone Wrong(I really, really want to trash this one. I was lazy in writing it, I think and it's really half-assed), Ken The Masseur and Lost With An Idiot(another half-assed attempt at humour). After reading those, you'll think I'm one sucky writer, srsly.

Lol, but that's not to say all my fics are bad! I acknowledge that some of my fics are good. Based on the feedback I got, these are some of the btter ones; I Hear You, Just Two Words, What Make-Up Can't Hide, Brother Of Mine, Knickers(several people have asked me if they can translate this into their language and put it up on their website. lol, I guess it's counted as a success at humour), Love Addict, Regardless(personally one of my favourite fics as well), Shop-soiled, Sexually ... )

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silveryxdark January 29 2011, 11:37:02 UTC
I'll read this when I get home :D It looks so promising <3

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silveryxdark January 29 2011, 14:06:16 UTC
Oh man, that was really really interesting :DDD Satoru is so arrogant and cool, only to meet his match in this asskicking Hideto. Oh yeaaah I like :D

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b_sim January 29 2011, 17:07:22 UTC
So glad you enjoyed~

That's what makes it interesting, I think! It's like a power struggle between the both of them. Neither of them will want to give in, but we all know who wins in the end. >)

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annui January 29 2011, 12:56:18 UTC
Woooaaaahhhh so many good gifts in HYDE's bDay!
Belle write a fic again and looks like this gonna be a long chaptered?? *pleaaaassseee??? X)*

Cute young adorable Gackt Satoru and looks like going to be seme tattoed Hyde Hideto :p
I LIKED it! I count on your very-fast-updating-fics skill XDD

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b_sim January 29 2011, 17:09:12 UTC
I'm actually hoping this one won't drag too long, lol! The story I had in mind is kinda short. I'm hoping to get this done in less than five chapters. :P

Young Satoru(like in Malice Mizer or Mizerable) is waaaaaay cute and tattooed Hideto is just so hot. I HAD to give him tattoos. His personality in this fic begged for it. xD

I'm glad you liked it! Lol, don't count too much on fast updates though. School's a real bitch. :(

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annui January 30 2011, 00:07:17 UTC
Haha is that so? The first chapt made me thinking of a long chaptered fic because they like cat and dog here, LOL, no romance yet..

I know! You have cute pic there! X)

OK bb, have fun in writing it, no rushing.. :*

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b_sim January 30 2011, 11:47:37 UTC
Their relationship is going to be hard to work with, but I'm hoping I can work it out somehow, haha. I really don't want this to drag too long. :P

Thanks for understanding~ *chu*

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love_teddies January 29 2011, 13:00:10 UTC
yay. gackt needs someone to control him. -way to go hyde-
but it'll be nce if you write something on scattered petals. lord takarai hideto is feeling neglected on his birthday

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b_sim January 29 2011, 17:12:08 UTC
Which is why I like Hyde x Gackt more. :P

Lol, his birthday is actually on the sixth of December. And Satoru's birthday is in November. :) Like I said, they're both quite individualistic to me now. Thinking of them like Hyde and Gackt is really, really strange. xD

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yuki_kumi January 29 2011, 13:09:03 UTC
ehmmm I haven't read Scattered Petals yet *mayor epic fail* XD
can't help it with HxG pairing, only if they switch the role some times :D
but I think this is good, looking forward for it~~

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b_sim January 29 2011, 17:13:37 UTC
I prefer Hyde x Gackt, because I think it's a lot realistic than Gackt x Hyde. XD Because Gackt's so whipped by Hyde and Hyde's so much like a man(in terms of personality, I mean) that I can't see him bottoming. :P

Ah, this is Hyde x Gackt, but I hope you'll enjoy it. :P

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