[fanfic] 8059 PRELUDE

[bababanaba]

This is a long one. It feels like it. It has angst and oh oh oh it's been marinated in my head for so long.

Word count: 788

Disclaimer: The Butler does not own the characters portrayed in this fanfiction, nor does she profit from it. They belong to the creative universe of the manga Katekyo Hitman Reborn! And it’s creator.

Contains: Gokudera, Yamamoto

Comments

[mangy_mongrel]

It feels like a long one to me too. Write more! Haha.

I love the simplicity and beauty of this line: It turns out pretty sure is not as solid as, say, positively confirmed. It just has so much foreboding in it. And of course angst.

Um lesse concrit. Haha I think I nitpick a lot..."Whatever I decide to do..." and therefore also "Huh?". Perhaps it would be better to follow Reborn had said with Dino had affirmed instead of Dino affirmed. Also, maybe you could reword and generally preside over his presiding over the whole thing... ahaha it sounds kind of weird unless you meant it to? And. Um. Is this too much? If it is I can stop here.

You have some marvelous turns of the language there, and I am totally a sucker for angst!fics like these, so please do continue!

[minayuurei]

Ooooh~~! I would be keeping track of this! ^^

[yuikoshiro]

Oh oh this looks really promising!

Wonderful prelude, you've got me hooked from the 1st paragraph.

Not that I would pass up 8059 angst, haha.

Eagerly awaiting for updates here!

[itsuka_yamazaki]

As much as I love well written KHR one shots, I love the well written long ones as well. And you don't see that much often, do you?

I can't wait for you to continue. I'll be keeping track like the others for your continuation!

Ilovewherethisisgoing. /total angst bunny too