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Part CCCIV - a lala bye

Dec 31, 2009 01:55

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There seemed to be a maturity and hardness around her face making her pale face look like granite.
She smirked when she saw the surprise on his face and tapped her heel. “Done looking Snape?” she said in a disobedient voice and smirked again. He was surprised how much her smirk was like his. He figured this must be a prostitute or a scamp.
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allemande January 1 2010, 22:05:35 UTC

“Done looking Snape?” she said in a disobedient voice and smirked again. He was surprised how much her smirk was like his.

...She was really good at looking Snape, too.

out of the corner of my eye i noticed harry trying to hermione from killing ron

...but I was too busy staring at Draco trying to keep Neville from shagging Snape.

and the tiresome and beaten expressions plastered on everyone’s faces

... They were almost as bad as that granite look that had been in fashion last summer.

“Well duh Co” said Lena sarcastically

"It's DRAY-co," Draco said, patiently. "Dray. Not Drah, not Dah, not Duh."

(Btw, if Harry ever goes into business, he really shouldn't go for "Harry & Co", should he.)

januaried January 3 2010, 20:45:46 UTC

Mmmm, butter bear! Wonder what that tastes like.

Feel free to take, as usual:

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karthzon January 18 2010, 16:33:58 UTC

out of the corner of my eye i noticed harry trying to hermione from killing ron

I think you accidentally a word here.

In my last story I gave Harry a sister and I will in this one but her name will be different. Before his sisters name was Alex, this time her name it Kara. Some things will change from Alex to Kara. She has special abilities but not the four elements like before. This time, she can read a persons soul, (which will be explained later).

This A/N is... special. I can't describe it any other way.

Kara looked into the old mans eyes, and read his soul. She saw that he was desperate, fear, and pleading.

Wow, she read the soul of the embodiment of fear and still remained coherent afterwards? She really is a Mary-Sue.

immortaltity

Best new word y/y?

"I'm sure you remember your grandmother, Suzan. Yes...well, she was the most powerful witch in the world. She had invincible powers that Dumbledore and Voldemort couldn't possibly match. It was--" I interrupted her quickly ( ... )