Fanfic: VS Jun☆

[babicchan]

Hello! Ohisashiburi～
It's been a really long time since the last time i wrote here in my LJ!
Both RL kept me busy and also i'm quite lazy, so in my spare time i just tried to keep in track with the Arashigoto:D but i've not been active =.=

Lately i've been reading and i've fallen again for Arashi fanfics and so while watching an episode of VSA i

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[nuraisha]

sakumoto <3
i can't help but grin when i saw sho slapped Iwao for picking on Jun.
it's definitely LOVE. ^__^

[babicchan]

In that moment i kind of saw a bit of terror for Jun's reaction in Sho's eyes XD same for Nino at the end when they finally lost for real XD
Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

[shojunniji]

Awww, I loved this very much, congratulations on your first fic!!
I wrote my first one about 3 months ago and now I'm addicted, lolz

anyway, I think you are very good in telling their feelings, and the fight he was having inside, anger and regrets at the same time, and I like Sho here, he's really mature ^^
also, I liked the last part,
"as fragments of fragile crystal- being collected again, slowly, careful not to cut himself" I think it's beautiful
thank you so much for sharing this, and keep writing, please :)

[shojunniji]

sorry,
"and the fight he was having inside"
I meant he=Jun here ^^

[babicchan]

Oh dear, thank you so much for reading and commenting !<3 I'm very happy to hear you liked it as i really really love your fics, so i appreciate you point of view!
Wow only 3months ago ? you're so good at it! And lol your addiction is getting readers addicted as well:D
Hope to get inspired and write again and :D
Thank you again for reading !

[geminib]

Is this really your first? It is good! Thank you :)

[babicchan]

Yes,thank you so much! :)
And thanks for commenting～

[jellybean6972]

I really couldn't believe how much the news blew Jun's attitude out of proportion. To me his attitude wasn't that big of a deal, but maybe they felt like picking on him cause he's Matsumoto Jun from Arashi. *shrugs*

Anyways, I really enjoyed this! Sho's face was kinda serious when he hit the guest that said that about Jun~ ;)

Thanks for sharing~ :)

[babicchan]

Yeah, i read the news before seeing it and i thougt they sure exaggerated it, infact as i watched it i think he was not being so stubborn, he was also laughing and joking about it even if it was clear he was still irritated/shaked about it .
But yeah of course he's an idol and even little particoulars in behavior in tv programs like this are visile :D

Anyway of course I created fiction around it :D so maybe i made it seem exaggerated too, but i intended it in order to express feelings of confusion - upset^^

Lol sorry for the long reply, thank you so much for reading! ;)

[babicchan]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Oh really you was wondering it?XD maybe there are others or citation at least about this episode :D sorry for my ignorance about it, what do you mean beta here?XD (gh sorryXD)

[babicchan]

ok it was what i thought then lolXD
Oh really?°.° thank you for telling me! i read it several times but didn't notice, i'm going to check it one more time, then next time i'm going to ask someone to check it :)