I'm writing the end of my short story. I'm especially pleased with the lines:
Tearing at his clothes and face, Davies tried to scream but all that came out was a gush of blood, closely followed by unidentifiable limbs covered in reptilian eyes.
and
From several “mouths” it screamed, a loud wet roar that sounded like churning vomit.
As you can tell
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