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Feb 09, 2010 20:33

Title: Incubus
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Rating: NC17
Summary: Arthur is given a gift. One he cannot possibly use.
Warnings: Wingfic, magic made them encourages them to do it, Princely angst.
AN: Beta by the lovely hugglesnkisses

Incubus, 1/1 )

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ebonyfeather February 9 2010, 21:23:25 UTC
This was adorable; I loved Merlin comforting Arthur at the beginning. And the mental image of Arthur with wings is a very appealing image...

Loved it.

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lady_razzle February 13 2010, 15:13:52 UTC
Thank you very much! And I'm also very glad you were the first comment on this fic, as now every time I get a comment notification, it mentions feathers! xx

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leathlin February 9 2010, 21:25:30 UTC
I truly loved every single line♥

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lady_razzle February 13 2010, 15:14:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

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helva2260 February 9 2010, 21:26:32 UTC
I love this story. It pulled me through so many emotions alongside Arthur and Merlin - Arthur's fear of his father finding out, the delight at getting to try out his dreams, the intoxication of the magic that followed (which was oh so very hot!) and then the angsty morning-after.

I liked that Merlin was the first and only person that Arthur trusted to help with his problem, and I loved that it wasn't just easy when they woke up the next day (and Arthur using the feather analogy to ask if their friendship had been hurt was a really nice touch). It felt a much more realistic outcome to the situation than just taking things for granted would have been. And of course it's always nice when Merlin gets to comfort Arthur *g*.

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lady_razzle February 13 2010, 15:15:16 UTC
Thanks very much! Yeah,I can't seem to resist the temptation to explore the poor prince's vulnerabilities. :s

:)

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feelsthemagic February 9 2010, 21:28:28 UTC
aww, its beautiful. i love that arthur had wings, and i love that he dreamed of merlin. i am a secret sucker for arthur-is-guilty-for-taking-advantage-of-merlin! fics.

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lady_razzle February 13 2010, 15:15:31 UTC
Thank you very much! Me too, me too. ;)

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tetsubinatu February 9 2010, 21:58:39 UTC
Unusual and beautiful. I really enjoyed this - and particularly the comfort in the morning.

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lady_razzle February 13 2010, 15:15:54 UTC
Thank you. :)

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