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Apr 19, 2010 19:17

Title: Gravity
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Rating: PG
Summary: Angst ficlet. (~400 words) There’s a difference between knowing the right path and taking it.
Disclaimer: Star Trek is older than I am. ;)
AN: Unbetad.

Pulling me back, pulling me in )

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thisissirius April 19 2010, 18:31:51 UTC
I love this a lot. How Captain Kirk becomes Jim when Spock touches him and how he can't end it, not with Spock being this attentive and loving and even though he knows it has to finish, there's a sense of his reluctance to do so as well. Lovely ♥

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lady_razzle April 19 2010, 20:29:02 UTC
Thanks honey. I'm so glad the captain to Jim thing worked, especially in such a small fic. :)

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lady_razzle April 19 2010, 20:29:28 UTC
Thank you, darling! <3

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kianspo April 19 2010, 19:49:58 UTC
I can just see this becoming more painful and tearing Jim apart before he does finally take some action. Beautiful work. ~

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lady_razzle April 19 2010, 20:29:50 UTC
Thank you very much. <3

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laura_iskra April 19 2010, 20:01:23 UTC
love the transition from captain to jim!

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lady_razzle April 19 2010, 20:30:03 UTC
And I love... YOU

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daphnie_1 April 19 2010, 20:31:42 UTC
Ohh this is lovely and has so much going on in it <3 Your writing style is just so smooth. Beautiful work.

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lady_razzle April 21 2010, 07:46:55 UTC
Thank you very much. :)

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