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copperiisulfate March 25 2012, 08:45:28 UTC
augh! this is a punch right in the feelings! but your words are so beautiful ;__;

also, now i can't shake off nezumi reading rimbaud oh man.

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blurmeese March 25 2012, 13:01:22 UTC
;A; thank you so much for thinking so! urgh no.6 took my feelings and stomped on them, negl~

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makeanewworld March 25 2012, 13:20:12 UTC
So sad and so beautifully written. I like the small glimpses on how No.6 itself was recovering and rebuilding. And of course Inukashi would run from it...

The comparisons with Peter Pan were clever - never closing the window, indeed. Poor Shion. :(

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blurmeese March 26 2012, 04:04:44 UTC
<3 thank you so much for reading this! and hng I've always found the idea of Peter Pan exceptionally sad, with Wendy always waiting for Peter to come back.

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analineblue March 25 2012, 23:07:02 UTC
Oh. OH. ;___; Yeah, this is really lovely. Heartbreaking, too? But lovely all the same. <3

Thank you for sharing! ...And moral support for all the feelings!! XD;;

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blurmeese March 26 2012, 04:05:12 UTC
:D thank you for reading and thinking so! ajsdbaj oh god I need all the moral support I can get atm, 2 days on and my heart is still in tatters ;______;

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alice_pike March 27 2012, 21:29:30 UTC
Oh my Jesus, why would you do this?? Agh, my feelings. I am having so many feels right now and I can't deeaalll with them.

This is just heartbreakingly beautiful. I especially love the parentheticals and the 'more of a plea than anything,' and the way you make forgetting seem like the natural thing it is, over so much time.

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blurmeese March 28 2012, 04:00:35 UTC
sobs my feelings are still pretty much in turmoil after watching No.6 as well asdkjnak WHEN WILL THE PAIN EVER STOP?? ;A; but oh <3 thank you for reading this and liking it!

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ragingfirefall April 23 2012, 11:56:20 UTC
Well, that tore my heart out and stomped on it. D:

This was amazing, though, and I loved it, even if it did break my heart. I now have to go read reunion fic in order to reestablish my headcanon that Nezumi will definitely return someday, but still I thank you for this lovely, poignant meditation on waiting and forgetting and remembering.

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blurmeese April 24 2012, 06:51:14 UTC
:D thank you so much for thinking this is good askdnajk these two break my heart so badly urghhh <3 but it's also my personal headcanon as well that one day Nezumi will come back and open a bakery with Shion so they can do domestic!things together in aprons forever be with Shion. Yeah. :D

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