Lithium

[babycloud_ai]

Title: Lithium
Author: yesunglover 
Length: Oneshot
Rating: R
Pairing: Heechul x Yesung

Summary: He had been a bit off that day, a little too loud and a little too high. I thought he was a bit mad smiling the way he did. I noticed how fast he was going but the wind whipping through my hair was all too refreshing and there wasn’t any traffic going up Ansan anyway

Comments

[nekonightingale]

This was really amazing and deep. Most fics I have read now a days has been full of crack I do like crack fics!, or drama, but this... I like this kind of agnst. And with YeChul? Made It even better. It seemed so real v.v

<3

[babycloud_ai]

lol, it's not amazing or deep, that was just me trying to be smart when I'm not haha I was just winging it so it was kinda hard to write. I don't think it's my best work not that I'm a good writer but I'm glad you think it is like you say, amazing and deep ♥ I love angst what can I say... and crack but I can't really write those

Thanks for reading/commenting love ^^

[nekonightingale]

Aww but It Is! you shouldn't sell your-self short! It may not be your best work but you are a good writer :) I don't like much angst It makes me feel bad but this was bitter sweet :) I can't really write crack or angst to save my life :/

Your welcome :) I really like your writing <3

<3

[babycloud_ai]

Aww thanks... I try not to sometimes but your own self is your best critic right?

[purplesilklace]

I like this fic. Tbh, it's not the most amazing thing I've ever read in terms of language usage in some parts (holy shit, the entire first paragraph is ONE GIANT SENTENCE), but then again, stuff like that isn't really important (always) and uh, as you said, it's un-betaed. Over all, a good job! :)
I like how you described the manic episode of the bipolar disease (small minus for not mentioning the depressive episode, small plus for kind of having it present in his character from the beginning as well as apart of the mixed phase), and your usage of language.
You used the word 'oblivion'... I love you forever.
And yes, cookie for not breaking into fluff in the end and ending the fic very well :)

(lol, I'm bad at the whole c+c thing xD *runs off*)

[babycloud_ai]

Thank you! This is my first c+c and I love you for it

[lametortoise]

wow... this is amazing... i really like it... it was so dark... do a sequel? lol... the romantic in me demands it... haha... i want them together!!! lol...

THANKS FOR WRITING!!!

i actually saw ur kyubum fic on miracle while i was looking for kyubum but i guess that was from ur old account... i can't wait for the next update!

[babycloud_ai]

Do a sequel? I think my brain cells will fry if I were to do that coz this was kinda hard to write since I don't know everything about the disease.

They are together... kind of, so I'll leave you to imagine their happy ending ahaha

And thanks for reading *hugs*

You found them?? How far did you go back? That was ages ago! It'll be up on Friday so patience my love ^ ^

[lametortoise]

it was easy actually... haha... i was looking under the kyubum tag... there aren't too many kyubum fics... even on miracle... about 20 or so... lol... but of course i couldn't read them... haha... even ur minwook one was there... lol...

[mayshy]

omg!!! no... this has got to be one of the most amazing pieces i have read! it just seriously pulled me in and i could hardly breathe.

i would write more, but i am a little incoherent atm... but seriously i loved it and i will so memm this.

[babycloud_ai]

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you love it even though it's not really well executed but I'm really, really, really glad it has some effects on you. And you're memming this! I so love you *squeezes you*

[mayshy]

not the best executed, but ur vocabulat and ur writing sucked me in ^^ besides it's way better than i'll ever write keke. and this is meant for memms ^^

and and i am starting to like yechul now keke

[babycloud_ai]

Haha, I need to widen my vocab and work on my word usage and structure in my opinion. I think you're not so bad plus there's plenty of online dictionary to help you.

I like yechul too but that's just me loving all rare pairings haha

[waruiyume80]

I love this like seriously. But that commenter is right about that block of text right at the beginning ^^ and I love the word oblivion too and I don't think you need to have a sequel for this. It just won't be right.

[babycloud_ai]

Haha, I'll try not to do that next time. Tbh, I didn't notice it until she pointed it out so I re read the whole thing *gets bricked*

I don't think it needs a sequel too