They got nothing on you

Aug 30, 2010 21:47

Title: They got nothing on you
Author: babycloud_ai
Pairing: Doojoon / Dongwoon
Rating: Pg 13

Author's Notes: My first non Suju fic and it’s my first time posting so I’m nervous since I think it’s badly written (not a fan of my own word usage) unbeta’ed so please be nice, leave me some love even if it’s tough love ♥

This has nothing to do with their actual live ( Read more... )

doojoon x dongwoon, b2st

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xanderleach August 30 2010, 18:59:49 UTC
Aw man this was intensely CUTE<33
And then it broke my heart in damn pieces at the end. Kikwang :(
Happy ending for him too, no? *does puppy eyes*

Wow your a great writer, :D you made this seem so..natural. Like realistic fiction? Believable that it could happen in reality? gah I can never explain myself....T___T

POINT being; I LOVED THIS. :)<3

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babycloud_ai August 31 2010, 12:10:55 UTC
Kikwang will get his happy ending, I'm working on it *fix your heart back*

Wow your a great writer, :D you made this seem so..natural. Like realistic fiction? Believable that it could happen in reality? gah I can never explain myself....T___T

Haha, no worries, I get what you mean and that's a huge compliment love, you gave me too much credit but thanks really, I'm just glad you liked it *hugs*

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angelicxiah777 August 30 2010, 19:31:09 UTC
awwww. this was such a cute story. I really enjoyed it. x3 You should make a companion piece for Kikwang so he could get a happy ending xD ...or not.

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babycloud_ai August 31 2010, 12:13:07 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it and I'm actually working on it's companion piece. Hopefully it doesn't take too long *crosses fingers*

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pika_slap August 31 2010, 03:43:45 UTC
kya~~~~so cute X3
doowoon is amazing,but kiki needs some loving too :(
loved it. loved it. loved. it. :3

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babycloud_ai August 31 2010, 12:14:36 UTC
Thank you, thank you, thank you <3

And Kiki will definitely get his loving alright, I'm working on it *grins*

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yunsias August 31 2010, 07:41:25 UTC
This is so so so cute, with a little bit of angst. I like how you added Woon's hesitation, uncertainties and doubts and you wrote it clearly. You're an awesome writer!

Yes, I want a Kiseung side story too! But I'm kinda satisfied with this ending already, seeing as Seung has no interest in Kwang. I just love it whenever Seung goes "HONEY!", it's so cute.

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babycloud_ai August 31 2010, 12:19:43 UTC
Aww... you gave me too much credit love but thanks for the compliment anyway, it's really huge for me <3

I'm actually working on it's companion piece because my heart just won't allow it, Kiki unloved is just so sad... Hopefully it won't take too long though.

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7seasatleast August 31 2010, 11:08:27 UTC
omg it was so cute and adorable and i love duwoon like that, shy dongwoon and bossy dujun, its perfect ;_;

and that moment on rooftop my heart has melted ;_;

please write more duwoon ♥♥!

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babycloud_ai August 31 2010, 12:25:43 UTC
Haha, Doojoon should be bossy since he's the leader (>.<)

Anyway, thanks for reading, I'm glad it's to your liking. Write more duwoon? Hmm... no promises but I'll definitely try ^^

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