The made up boy ● 8th

[babycloudy]

Title: The made up boy
Author: babycloudy
Chapter: 8/9
Pairings: Yesung/Kyuhyun, bestfriend!Yesung/Siwon, parents!Hankyung/girl!Heechul, parents!Kangin/girl!Leeteuk
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Gender switch for Heechul & Leeteuk | Grammatical errors
Disclaimer: The idea was from my sister's keeper
Summary: He was made to be used. To be controlled.

Comments

SPOT for sujulovenl

[babycloudy]

still, i don't know how to do it, lmao 8D

Re: SPOT for sujulovenl

[sujulovenl]

xD I'll give you a printscreen tutoral soon :') I thought you died or something, it took you so long! D: I was checking your journal 10 times an hour xD Anyway, I will read this soon, got to go for a while now D: So actually this comment is useless XD Ignore me LOL

Re: SPOT for sujulovenl

[babycloudy]

well, i almost died actually. lol 8D
sorry about that. i really can't think of anything and i even forgot my assignment, trololol XD
uh really? omg >////< i never think you could do that >///< ...
take care!!! ^o^
no. im not going to ignore you <333 LOLS

Re: SPOT for sujulovenl

[sujulovenl]

You almost died?D: HOW?! Be carefull :3

Anyway, lets go on topic :3 AWWW you named me at your A/N! XD *proud* :') Don't say sorry, you are giving me/us the best :D
I really liked this chapter again ^^ Though, it makes me sad too xD Poor Kyuhyun :( I know how it feels to have guilt the rest of your life, unable to ever fix it, so i can identify with Kyuhyun's feelings D: I do think Jongwoon will survive though, you wouldn't let him die would you?!D: WOULD YOU?!

O yeah, this part:

"Don't worry. When he said he loves you, it means he can't get mad at you."
Kyuhyun sighed, "Is that so? I feel more guilty then." he said and gave a dry laugh.

Made me lol xD Poor Siwon trying to cheer him up, only ends up making it worse xD

I see this is the first last chapter, only one to go D: Aww :( I am curious about the end! ^^ Fighting ♥♥♥♥

[babycloudy]

huh? i thought you have a strong heart unnie oO
i'm sorry i'm sorry .... >///////////< *inside: happy* XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

but i want him to diieeeeeeeeee T___________T
kekeke! i can't help it, it just CUTEEEEEEEE GYAAAHH!!!
i love you too unnie <33333 LOL

[babycloudy]

kekeke. sorry untie *runs~~~~~~~*
uh. sorry for my late reply too. yeay! no war :PPP

:DD

[cloud_alones]

TT__________TT)
don't die....

update soon!!!!

[rednochan]

is it jongwoon going to die in the next chap????? nooo~~~~ T____T
i don't see any warning about death character so he's not gonna die, rite? *plz, just say yes*
i love angst but i like it having a happy-ending.. *i'm weird, i know*

wait... *imagining heechul as ur mom, and walk through ur school hallway* it would be awesome!! XD

[lulufeca]

oh my god you are going to kill yesung! dooooont

yesung´s sentences broke my heart, he is adorable being sick

please just suffering yesung, not dead!yesung

dont worry, i am liking ^^