The made up boy ● 9th

[babycloudy]

Title: The made up boy
Author: babycloudy
Chapter: 9/10
Pairing: Yesung/Kyuhyun, bestfriend!Yesung/Siwon, parents!Hankyung/girl!Heechul, parents!Kangin/girl!Leeteuk
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Gender switch for Heechul and Leeteuk | Grammatical errors
Disclaimer: The idea was from my sister's keeper
Summary: He was made to be used. To be controlled

Comments

[lulufeca]

yesung has sooo many people loving him, he just need to wake up... wake up, baby!

oh... english is getting better or i am starting to forget to see your mistakes, because i loooooove your fic! s2

be happy girl ^^

[babycloudy]

yes, and I wanna be like him in this state! Too many people loving me? ;~~~~~~~~~;

you know. i don't even care about the english anymore. i just writing, haha, because if i'm too focusing on grammar i was like *died* and if i wait for someone to beta the fic will never published. so yeah, please bear with my broken english ;~~~;

you too <3333 i love happiness :DDDD

[rednochan]

i'm begging u to not make him die. but in real life, someone with such condition may only has almost zero chance to live. but this is fic, anything could happen, including jongwoon suddenly wake up in a very healthy condition, run towards kyu and kiss him XD *oh, my stupid imagination*
this is ur fic so u decide! ^^
one more chap, fighting! ^^

[babycloudy]

why? why? why? i love die!Jongwoon TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

oO wogh. is that a human or what? hahaha. love your imagination anyway <3 8DDDDD
one more chap! ^^d khekhe. thank you for supporting me for sooooooooooooooo damn long :DDD

[yukihime13]

please live yesungie T.T

but of course the writer would be the one to choose that.. i'm sure the ending would be great either way..

the sweet family scenes are just so fluffy..

and yes,chullie, yesung is a cloud :)

cant wait for your update

[babycloudy]

haha. thanks!
yes, i just... love family scenes im sorry to write it more and more ;~;

thank you for always supporting, you don't know how much i was touched by it ;~~~~;

[charismavi]

XDD OMG, I shouldn't be laughing right?!? But their conversation to the sleeping Jongwoon just too...adorable..
Kangin the great Father in law, Leeteuk the quite pervy mother in law (make out on the beach XDD), Heechul with the Clouds obsession, and Hankyung's guilt for allowing it...

But, Jongwoon will wake up right? Right?