The made up boy ● 1st

[babycloudy]

Title: The made up boy
Author: babycloudy
Chapter: 1/?
Pairing: Yesung/Kyuhyun, bestfriend!Yesung/Siwon, parents!girl!Heechul/Hankyung, parents!Kangin/girl!Leeteuk.
Genre: Angst
Rating PG-13
Warning: Gender switch for Heechul and Leeteuk | Grammatical errors.
Disclaimer: The idea was from my sister's keeper ^^
Summary: He was made to be used, to be

Comments

[lulufeca]

oh.. yesung´s parents beat him?

its a little rushed and i had to read twice to understand who was talking...

then... yesung´s parents are evil, siwon wants to help him, but siwon´s parents cant take yesung to their house...

i think its a good plot
want to read mooore

[babycloudy]

Sometimes they hit him, but actually there are more big scene and reasons behind those bruises.

Oh, I'm sorry to made you confused, that's why I need this comments so I know where to correct. ^^
If you think Yesung's parents are evil, I'm agree with you! :D

Ah, thank you so much, I really don't know about this plot will be going later on, but I'm glad you like it, you give me much confidence to continue the fic :DD
the 2nd chapter was up <3

[neyaays]

Hmmm....What's happen with yesung?? *I hope he's not a prostitute* :(

Anyway.....It's Kyusung!!!!! ~kyaaa~
Update soon please :))

[babycloudy]

You will know later, but it's definitely not a prostitute, maybe it will be evil-er than that ;-;
haha, I guess you are a KyuSung hard shipper, well~ nice to know!! since me too (include YeWon)!!! ^O^

thank you so much for commenting, your simple comment really doing so much for me ;~; the 2nd chapter was up already :DD

[pureclouds]

geesshhhh i almost cry dammit
there are not many fics tht made my eyes watered, but this is one of it.
;___;

"That's alright, Mom..." he mumbled that made Heechul gasped. I.LOVE.THIS.OHMYGOD.

[babycloudy]

I'm sorry and I'm glad to know that <3

Actually, I love that part too ;____; and it made me missing my mom more ;_____;

[pureclouds]

i know right??
that phrase kinda made me missd my mom.
;__;

[kyusung_addict]

Hi new reader here ^ ^
I liked the story so far and since it's kyusung I really wanna know whats gonna happen (run to read the 2nd chapter)

[nytslyer03]

can you please add me?? please? I wanna read this.. thank you!