Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 11

Jan 28, 2011 17:01


Continuing with my Chlarky updates, and finally, a new chapter of Crisis. - a nice long one.  Hope you like it.

And I still love feedback. :-)

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iluvaqt January 29 2011, 10:22:34 UTC
Oh wow how could you leave it there? But amazing update. I loved all the concern for Chloe in this and also her discoveries.

Seeing and reading about Gabe, his fatherly affection and care brought tears to me eyes, he's such an underutilized character.

Wooo the suspense is going to kill me. Is there a possibility? I would make for true drama but a little realistic considering their incompatibility. :(

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babydee1 February 4 2011, 16:15:15 UTC
"Oh wow how could you leave it there? "

You know I never mean to tease y'all, Kimmy!

...okay, maybe a little...! ;-)

"But amazing update. I loved all the concern for Chloe in this and also her discoveries."

I think the more she knows, the better able she'll be to face Clark and get some solid answers.

"Seeing and reading about Gabe, his fatherly affection and care brought tears to me eyes, he's such an underutilized character."

I agree; the show began to lose direction when the parental influences were sidelined. Jonathan died in Season 5, and Martha was severely underused in Season 6, after which she left the show as a regular. And even in the episodes she's returned in, she didn't make much of an impact. Not a good one, anyway. Red Queen, anyone? *scoffs*

"Wooo the suspense is going to kill me. Is there a possibility? I would make for true drama but a little realistic considering their incompatibility. :("Hah. It's fanfic, babes - anything's a possibility. But there will be no pregnancy in this story, simply ( ... )

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eternal_moonie January 29 2011, 10:51:03 UTC
AWESOME chapter!

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babydee1 February 4 2011, 16:16:59 UTC
Thanks, babes!!!

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easilyenraged January 30 2011, 09:09:44 UTC
Lovin' it, I miss Gabe.

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babydee1 February 4 2011, 16:21:43 UTC
Me too, hun. :-)

Glad you like!

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jacques21 January 31 2011, 10:42:59 UTC
God this story is totally breaking my heart.

Glad Chloe is researching everything about what Clark told her cause she wouldn't have been her if she didn't. She really needs to finish that convo with him so that she knows that it was the red meteor rocks that turned him into the animal that raped her.

I feel bad that Clark is walking around thinking that he might have gotten Chlo pregnant. That talk is going to be painful.

Can't wait for Chloe and Martha's first conversation since she revealed to her and Jonathon what her son did to her.

It's always good to see Gabe involved in his daughter life. I think a lot of people forget that they can actually add him in fanfiction.

Can't wait for more.

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babydee1 February 4 2011, 17:19:28 UTC
"God this story is totally breaking my heart."

I know the feeling. :-(

"Glad Chloe is researching everything about what Clark told her cause she wouldn't have been her if she didn't."

Keeping busy with the investigation is helping her cope, in a weird way.

"She really needs to finish that convo with him so that she knows that it was the red meteor rocks that turned him into the animal that raped her."

Aaah, but the old 'The RedK made me do it' excuse really won't cut it this time, though, I don't think. But we'll see.

"I feel bad that Clark is walking around thinking that he might have gotten Chlo pregnant. That talk is going to be painful."

It's horrible for both of them right now. Why did I ever start this story? :-(

"Can't wait for Chloe and Martha's first conversation since she revealed to her and Jonathon what her son did to her."

Actually, they guessed, and Clark confirmed it. :-)

"It's always good to see Gabe involved in his daughter life. I think a lot of people forget that they can actually add him in ( ... )

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madlenita February 3 2011, 10:34:21 UTC
Finally next chapter, and i mut say: very good.
SO Clark Now think about That possibility...
And ending, how up of Marta, i cant wait for next chapter....

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babydee1 February 4 2011, 16:23:26 UTC
"Finally next chapter, and i mut say: very good."

Thanks, Maddie! :-)

"SO Clark Now think about That possibility..."

Ha. He must be terrified, worrying about that in addition to everything else!

Awesome comments, thanks.

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