Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 18

May 22, 2011 00:12


Some more Crisis, peeps.  Enjoy! :-)


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madlenita May 23 2011, 09:18:05 UTC
Wow, so now Lana knows that Clark choose Chloe and Pete wants to be with with Chloe...
I so want to know what will happen next, but i guess that i will had to wait....
Thanks for this chapter...

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babydee1 June 1 2011, 10:43:18 UTC
Thanks, Maddie! You won't have too long to wait, I already posted the next chapter. I hope you get a new computer soon! :-)

*hugs*

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pompeypearly_v2 May 24 2011, 18:38:10 UTC
Gah! Poor Chloe...Poor Pete! And what another evil place to end the chapter!

Am i a bad person for liking Lana in tears? Yeah, probably...but it makes a nice change to see her on the receiving end of rejection for a change.

Can't wait to see the next update!

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babydee1 June 1 2011, 10:45:49 UTC
“Gah! Poor Chloe...Poor Pete! And what another evil place to end the chapter! ”

Sorry for yet another evil cliffie!!!

“Am i a bad person for liking Lana in tears?”

Nope! At least, not from where I’m standing. ;-)

“Yeah, probably...but it makes a nice change to see her on the receiving end of rejection for a change. ”

She won’t take it well, that much is certain!

“Can't wait to see the next update! ”

Already posted, luv. Enjoy, and thanks for commenting! :-)

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easilyenraged May 24 2011, 23:17:20 UTC
Good to have some Lana pain even if she marginally better her then in the show.

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babydee1 June 1 2011, 10:31:30 UTC
You might not be so forgiving once you read the next chapter. *g*

Glad you like, babes!

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The drama is just never ending... mari2anne May 26 2011, 11:06:42 UTC
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Re: The drama is just never ending... babydee1 June 1 2011, 10:53:11 UTC
“In some weird way this hit me as the saddest line in the story so far. It so aptly described how one horrible act changed Chloe from the sweetest thoughtful soul to someone capable of attempted murder... even though she might not truly believe that the locker incident could have killed Clark if Pete hadn't rescued him; if I remember correctly, Clark did tell her the stuff could kill him. ”

*iz grim* Oh, she knows. And she doesn’t care; I think a part of her actually does wish him dead, and she’s definitely getting some kind of twisted satisfaction from hurting him. :-/

“Lana, Lana, Lana... I am sort of speechless! I never liked how she always flirted with Clark even when she was with someone else! I'll just say that child has ISSUES! Not so sure it was smart of Clark to mention it was Chloe he loved. He should have just said, "You don't know her." But I get that he just wanted to get it through to her that CLANA just was not happening. I did like that Clark ended it with her, doing his best so that even she could understand there ( ... )

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simi24 May 26 2011, 23:11:25 UTC
Something tells me there is a story behind white chocolate chip muffins.

From muffins and cupcakes with notes attached to greenk, how their relationship has changed and my heart just broke for them both.

Why is it that everytime something happened that stopped Lana and Clark from getting together, they would always say, "let's start over." That is one relationship that had so many start overs that I lost count.

Was a little surprised that she didn't correct Pete about his assumptions.

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babydee1 June 1 2011, 11:01:11 UTC
“Something tells me there is a story behind white chocolate chip muffins. ”

Ooh, a Plot Bunny - YAY! :-D

“From muffins and cupcakes with notes attached to greenk, how their relationship has changed and my heart just broke for them both. ”

They’re just getting further and further away from the Chlark we know and love. Painful but necessary - and it’ll still get worse! But it will also get better, and they’ll be stronger on the other side. I think. :-/

“Why is it that everytime something happened that stopped Lana and Clark from getting together, they would always say, "let's start over." That is one relationship that had so many start overs that I lost count. ”

Well this time, it’s sunk faster than a gangster wearing cement boots, and it definintely ain’t floating back up, no sirree!!! :-D

“Was a little surprised that she didn't correct Pete about his assumptions. ”It’s not something she wants to advertise; bear in mind she didn’t even tell her own father because she doesn’t want him to look at her differently. The same ( ... )

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