Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 27

[babydee1]

So I started writing this chapter, and before I knew it, it took a rather dark turn, darker than I wanted it to.  I attempted a re-write, but ended up right back where I started, so I decided to run with it.  But there’s nothing to worry about.  Believe me when I say that there is redemption ahead for both Chloe and Clark, without a doubt; they

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[phantom_queen]

How can you just leave us hanging like that? Not fair!

[babydee1]

I never plan these cliffies - honest! ;-)

But you know Clark isn't going to stand by and watch Chloe top herself. :-P

Thanks for commenting!

[kitmerlot1213]

I think Chloe's finally screaming at Clark and letting all of her rage out will finally help her start to heal--continued excellent work on this gorgeous fic :)

[babydee1]

That was the plan, m'dear. ;-)

Glad you liked it! *cuddles*

[iluvaqt]

This is truly terrifying but then I do remember high school when things could feel so final and life ending. I remember my mum forbidding me to go on a camping trip with my boyfriend's family, reading more into it and feeling like she'd never let me be with him, that she'd always stop me from making my own decisions, controlling my life and wanting to pop a fist full of painkillers to make the pain go away. My sister crying next to me saying don't do it. And I did the same for her a few years later, explaining to her that one bad apple doesn't deserve her love or her throwing her chance at happiness someday away. We can't rely on people to make us happy, we need to find strength and love and hope for ourselves, there's more than this life. If you let someone else take away your self worth, your faith and your dreams, it's over. I don't know how she's going to get past this. Clark's trying to reach her but it seems to be falling on deaf ears. She hurts him, over and over, physically and emotionally. He would have done anything to take

[babydee1]

Those teenage/high school years are challenging enough as it is. Throw in the mess that these two are in, and it becomes straight-up catastrophic.

I know things look pretty hopeless between Chlark right now, but I assure you that they're not unsolvable. Not if I have anything to do with it. And I have everything to do with it. :)

Thanks so much for your honest feedback, Kimmy! It means the world that you understand what I'm trying to say with this piece. *huggles* :)

[csdslowpoke]

Oh dear this is so sad.but now that things have come to a head the healing can begin.Very tough subject to tackle but you are doing a good job.

[babydee1]

Thanks, babes. It is a very gruelling subject to try to bring to light, but having you all with me on the journey helps tremendously. *hugs*

[jacques21]

This showdown was definitely needed.

Rape... Attempted Murder... Suicide... Thank god that there's no where else that Clark can go but up. I don't know how you're going to pull it of though...

[babydee1]

It certainly looks hopeless, and I know its an uphill task to try and get these two back to good place...but I'll do my absolute best to achieve just that. :)

Thanks so much for commenting, Shonnia - and thanks for the Twitter pimp, too! I'm so chuffed! :)