Chlark Fanfic: Crisis, Chapter 27

[babydee1]

So I started writing this chapter, and before I knew it, it took a rather dark turn, darker than I wanted it to.  I attempted a re-write, but ended up right back where I started, so I decided to run with it.  But there’s nothing to worry about.  Believe me when I say that there is redemption ahead for both Chloe and Clark, without a doubt; they

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[pompeypearly_v2]

i've said it before, and i'll say it again...

YOU AND YOUR BLOODY CLIFFIES!!!

glad that they've had the opportunity for confrontation, but i need more dammit!

I'm surprised she thinks she can succeed in committing harry carry before Clark can get her to help. Just goes to show where her mind is (or isn't) at this stage.

[babydee1]

I'm pretty sure my icon reflects your mood at being punk'd by yet another Evil Cliffie! *g*

I'm updating as fast as I can, babes. It's so hard to find writing time.

Glad you like, and I'll try to rein in the suspense at the end of the next chapter! ;)

[jlvsclrk]

Trust Kal to tell the truth, even when it's so painful to hear. Listen, Chloe, please - he's right.

[babydee1]

Sometimes one has to be cruel to be kind, and this is one of those times. Poor Chloe must be absolutely terrified, but Kal knows what he's doing...I think. :-\

Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Jen! *huggles* :)

[sweetchiclovesu]

Hey,

I hope I haven't been too pushy in sending you too many messages, sorry if I have.

I want to add you as a friend but I didn't want you to get mad...I think you have to agree first. I don't know Livejournal very well.

Anyway, please update as soon as you can, this is a powerful story, well written and it's intriguing how you are going to write your way out of this one!

I have attempted a fic with rape in it, but the pyschological issues are so harsh it seemed to much.

You go dee! Please update when you can, and I hope you won't mind be begging you to update soon.

Celeste xx

[babydee1]

Hi Selene,

That's fine, you can friend me if you want! All my fics are on open posts, so you should be able to see them in your Friend's List.

Real Life is very demanding, so I'll update with the next chapter when I've had a chance to write it. Glad you like the story so far!

[christina_kat]

This might be the best chapter so far. Hell, this might be the best story I've ever read. I've been a little behind on this story but I'm catching up. You really made me tear up, girl.

[babydee1]

Hiya, CK! Hope things are settling in your lovely country. :-)

I know the State of the Chlark looks pretty bleak here, but I promise that the worst is now over. Promise :-)

So glad you liked it...and sorry for making you cry! *huggles*

[saurina]

OMG OMG OMG poor broken Chloe, I feel so sorry for her. She's just a shell of her old self. I also feel sorry for Clark, I know he did something so utterly wrong, but I can't help but be sorry for him.

Excellent writing Dee as always, I'm off to see what happens next..:))